It waShe is a puzzle to me. She is a puzzle to me.

It was ahad truly puzzle tod me. It had truly puzzled me.

My sSister My Sister

Title capitalization rules

My sSister My Sister

My sSister My Sister

Before, I just didn'tI could never really understand her at all. I could never really understand her.

The original is a bit unnatural.

Before, I just didcan't understand her at all. I just can't understand her at all.

Because you still cannot understand her, it should be present tense.

When she was too cold I alwayswould feel a lack of emotions in her. When she was too cold I would feel a lack of emotion in her.

When sShe was toocold; I could I always feel a lack of emotions in her. She was cold; I could always feel a lack of emotion in her.

No need to say "too" cold since cold is already a strong term to call someone. Saying she lacked emotion/empathy is basically just repeating that she was cold, so I framed it as such with the semicolon.

When sShe wais too cold and I always feel a lack of emotions in her. She is too cold and I always feel a lack of emotion.

When sShe was too cold and I always feelt a lack of emotions in her. She was cold and I always felt a lack of emotion in her.

When she was too cold II'd always feel as if she lack ofed emotions in her.whenever she gave me the cold shoulder I'd always feel as if she lacked emotions whenever she gave me the cold shoulder

"Cold shoulder" is a figure of speech that shows that she

However, aAt thate same time, she could cry alone when beingshe was too frustrated. At the same time, she could cry alone when she was too frustrated.

"However" is redundant.

However, at that same time, she could cry alone when beingshe was too frustrated. However, at that same time, she could cry alone when she was too frustrated.

However, aAt that same time, she could cryries alone when being too frustrated. At that same time, she cries alone when too frustrated.

However, at that same time she could cry alone when being tooshe was frustrated. However, at that same time she could cry alone when she was frustrated.

However, at that same time, she cwould cry alone when beingever she became too frustrated. However, at that same time, she would cry alone whenever she became too frustrated.

Me, I consider myself a very emotional person. I consider myself a very emotional person.

Redundant

MAs for me, I consider myself a very emotional person. As for me, I consider myself a very emotional person.

We never really begin sentences with "Me, I" in English. But you could say "as for me."

Me, I consider myself a very emotional person. I consider myself a very emotional person.

You don't need Me since I means the same thing.

Me, I consider myself a very emotional person. I consider myself a very emotional person.

Me, I consider myself to be a very emotional person. I consider myself to be a very emotional person.

Me, I consider myself a very emotional person. I consider myself a very emotional person.

I could cry a lot when seeing an emotional video on there in internet or in a movie. I could cry a lot when seeing an emotional video on the internet or in a movie.

I could cry a lot when seeile watching an emotional video on there in internet or in a movie. I could cry a lot while watching an emotional video on the internet or in a movie.

I could cry a lot when seeing a movie or an emotional video on there in internet or a movie. I could cry a lot when seeing a movie or an emotional video on the internet.

I reversed the order just to make it a little more natural to read.

I could cry a lot when seeingwatching a movie or an emotional video on there in internet or a movie. I could cry a lot when watching a movie or an emotional video on the internet.

I cwould cry a lot whenever seeing an emotional video on there in internet or tear-jerking scene in a movie. I would cry a lot whenever seeing an emotional video on the internet or tear-jerking scene in a movie.

Also, I used to cry when someone yelled at me angrily or when things weren't going my way. Also, I used to cry when someone yelled at me or when things weren't going my way.

No need for "angrily," the words yelling at someone already implies anger.

Also, I used to cry when someone yelled at me angrily or when things weren't going my way. Also, I used to cry when someone yelled at me or when things weren't going my way.

You don't really need angrily here as it is implied by yelled at.

Also, II also used to cry whenever someone yelled at me angrily, or when things weren't going my way. I also used to cry whenever someone yelled at me angrily, or when things weren't going my way.

Now, I don't cry that much now, but other's emotions of others always affects me. I don't cry that much now, but the emotions of others always affects me.

More natural

Now, I don't cry that much, but other's emotions of others always affect me. Now, I don't cry that much, but the emotions of others always affect me.

Now, I don't cry that much, but other's emotions always affect me. Now I don't cry that much, but other's emotions always affect me.

WithBy that I mean that I'm very empathetic. By that I mean that I'm very empathetic.

With that I mean that I'm very empathetic. I mean that I'm very empathetic.

With thatIn short, I mean to say that I'm a very empathetic. person In short, I mean to say that I'm a very empathetic person

Just a stylistic change :D

When I'm interacting with my sister, I can saytell she doesn't care about how others feel the way I do. When I'm interacting with my sister, I can tell she doesn't care about how others feel the way I do.

When I'm interacting with my sister, I can sayense that she doesn't care about how others feel the way I do. When I'm interacting with my sister, I can sense that she doesn't care about how others feel the way I do.

ButThis has also affected my self -esteem in the past because I used to base my self esteemit on how people would feel or think when beingthey were with me. This has also affected my self-esteem in the past because I used to base it on how people would feel or think when they were with me.

But it has also affected my self esteem in the past because I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think whilen being with me. But it has also affected my self esteem because I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think while being with me.

Since you're speaking in the past tense, there's no need to add "in the past." But if you want to say that it affected you before and no longer does, you could say "it used to affect my self esteem."

ButThis has also affected my self esteem in the past b. Because, I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think when being with me. This has also affected my self esteem in the past. Because, I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think when being with me.

But has alsIt used to affected my self esteem in the past because I used to base my self esteemit on how people feel or think whilen being with me. It used to affect my self esteem because I used to base it on how people feel or think while being with me.

I replaced the second "self esteem" with "it" to avoid repeating.

ButHowever, this has also affected my self esteem in the past because I used to bas, since my self -esteem would fluctuate based on how people feel or think when being with me. However, this has also affected my self esteem in the past, since my self-esteem would fluctuate based on how people feel or think when being with me.

But has also affected my self esteem in the past because I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think when beingthey are with me. But has also affected my self esteem in the past because I used to base my self esteem on how people feel or think when they are with me.

For example, Sshe can sometimes can say something too honest to me or my little brother. For example, she can sometimes say something too honest to me or my little brother.

For example, Sshe sometimes can say somethingbe too honest to me or my little brother. For example, she sometimes can be too honest to me or my little brother.

be would a little more natural here.

For example, Sshe sometimes can say something toooverly honest to me or my little brother. For example, she sometimes can say something overly honest to me or my little brother.

That is good, but at someonly to a certain degree. That is good, but only to a certain degree.

That is good, but ato some degree. That is good, to some degree.

That is a good, but at thing, but only to some degree. That is a good thing, but only to some degree.

That is good, but ato some degree. That is good, but to some degree.

That is good, but at some degreeHonesty's usually a good thing, but there's always a limit. Honesty's usually a good thing, but there's always a limit.

That is good, but at someonly to a certain degree. That is good, but only to a certain degree.

I'm not saying she doesn't have emotions, it's just that she keeps them to herself., I'm not saying she doesn't have emotions, it's just that she keeps them to herself,

and that's I want to understand more to help her when seeing her sad or unmotivated. I want to understand more to help her when seeing her sad or unmotivated.

and tThat's what's I want to understand more to, so I can help her when I seeing her she is sad or unmotivated. That's what I want to understand more, so I can help her when I see she is sad or unmotivated.

Generally you want to avoid beginning sentences with "and."

and that's I want to understand her more to help her when seeing herhe is sad or unmotivated. I want to understand her more to help her when she is sad or unmotivated.

and tThat's what's I want to understand more to help her when seeing herhe is sad or unmotivated. That's what I want to understand to help her when she is sad or unmotivated.

aAnd that's why I want to understand her more: to help her when seeing her sad or unmotivated.ever she's sad or feeling discouraged). And that's why I want to understand her more: to help her whenever she's sad or feeling discouraged).

and that's what I want to understand more to help her when seeing her sad or unmotivated. and that's what I want to understand more to help her when seeing her sad or unmotivated.

Thanks for reading. Thanks for reading.