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Tammy

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My Orchid is in Bloom

Finally, my orchid is in bloom.

It's not easy because it was delivered to me from Guangdong Province. You know the environment and the temperature are very different from those in Shanghai. And recently, Shanghai has been quite cold. We even had a temperature of four degrees below zero. Fortunately, my orchid is starting to bloom. I'll try to take some pictures for you tomorrow.

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My Orchid is in Bloom

Finally, my orchid is in bloom.

It's no wasn’t easy because it was delivered to me from Guangdong Province.

“Easy” seems odd here. Are you saying you had to work hard to get the orchid to bloom? Or the orchid itself had to work hard?

My suggestion:
This is no mean feat, because it came to me from Guangdong.

Are you familiar with the expression “no mean feat”? https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/be-no-mean-feat

You know, the environment and the temperature there are very different from those in Shanghai.

These two sentences would combine well:
This is no mean feat, because it came to me from Guangdong, where the environment and temperature are very different from Shanghai.

And recently, Shanghai has been quite cold.

We even had a temperature of four degrees below zero.

Fortunately, my orchid is starting to bloom.

I'll try to take some pictures for you tomorrow.

Feedback

That’s exciting! Congratulations 😊

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Tammy

today

37

Thank you so much!TIL what "no mean feat" is!

Have a nice day!

My Orchid is in Blooming

Finally, my orchid is in blooming.

It's not easy because it wasI got it delivered to me from Guangdong Province.

You know tThe environment and the temperature are very different from those in Shanghai.

And rRecently, Shanghai has been quite coldfreezing.

We even had a temperature of negative four degrees below zero.

Fortunately, my orchid is starting to bloom.

I'll try to take some pictures for you tomorrow.

Feedback

Great to hear that your orchid is blooming. I can't wait to see your pictures tomorrow.

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Tammy

today

37

Thanks again!

I'll show you the flowers this evening~

Have a nice day!

My Orchid is in Bloom


My Orchid is in Blooming

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Finally, my orchid is in bloom.


Finally, my orchid is in blooming.

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It's not easy because it was delivered to me from Guangdong Province.


It's not easy because it wasI got it delivered to me from Guangdong Province.

It's no wasn’t easy because it was delivered to me from Guangdong Province.

“Easy” seems odd here. Are you saying you had to work hard to get the orchid to bloom? Or the orchid itself had to work hard? My suggestion: This is no mean feat, because it came to me from Guangdong. Are you familiar with the expression “no mean feat”? https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/be-no-mean-feat

You know the environment and the temperature are very different from those in Shanghai.


You know tThe environment and the temperature are very different from those in Shanghai.

You know, the environment and the temperature there are very different from those in Shanghai.

These two sentences would combine well: This is no mean feat, because it came to me from Guangdong, where the environment and temperature are very different from Shanghai.

And recently, Shanghai has been quite cold.


And rRecently, Shanghai has been quite coldfreezing.

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We even had a temperature of four degrees below zero.


We even had a temperature of negative four degrees below zero.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Fortunately, my orchid is starting to bloom.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll try to take some pictures for you tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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