I have to say that there are many reasons for language learning,earning a language, so before I start answering your questions, please allow me to introduce myself: I have to say that there are many reasons for learning a language, so before I start answering your questions, please allow me to introduce myself:

Just a couple small edits to make the sentence sound more natural and to connect your indeas.

Hi, I am Zhou Zeya, an exchange student from the University Putra Malaysia. Hi, I am Zhou Zeya, an exchange student from the University Putra Malaysia.

AI am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration. I am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration.

AI am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration. I am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration.

Because of this ce Covid-19 epipandemic, I have been experiencundertaking two years of online classes. Because of the Covid-19 pandemic, I have been undertaking two years of online classes.

Because of this ce Covid-19 epidemic, I have been experiencinged two years of online classeslearning. Because of the Covid-19 epidemic, I have experienced two years of online learning.

It's unusual to say you "experienced" a class (more usual to say that you "took" or "are taking" a class), so I've changed it to "experienced online learning".

During these two years, I just kept working inworked in a few different companies as an intern. During these two years, I worked in a few different companies as an intern.

During these two years, I just kept working in differenthave been working at several companies as an intern. During these two years, I have been working at several companies as an intern.

So I also have two years of working experience. So I also have two years of work experience.

So I also have two years of working experience. So I also have two years of work experience.

I take thisam taking a course forto improvinge my poor English. I am taking a course to improve my poor English.

"This course" isn't defined, so I'm unsure what you are referring to. "A course" makes more sense here.

I takeam taking this course forin order to improvinge my poor English. I am taking this course in order to improve my poor English.

I have to say I am really bad at English because in the past II used to spend more time on my job rather than on language learning. I have to say I am really bad at English because I used to spend more time on my job rather than on language learning.

I have to say that I am really bad at English because in the past I spendedicated more time ton my job rather than to language learning. I have to say that I am really bad at English because in the past I dedicated more time to my job rather than to language learning.

Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you,. I think I am more like a first year 1 student, a noob on this road. Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you. I think I am more like a first year student, a noob on this road.

"Noob" is very much internet speak, you don't hear it much in real life!

Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you, I think I amfeel more like a year 1 student, a noobn amateur on this road. Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you, I feel more like a year 1 student, an amateur on this road.

"Noob" is too colloquial for this written context.

In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I just get to knowonly just found out that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior. In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I only just found out that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior.

In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I just geot to know that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior. In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I just got to know that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior.

I registered for this course immediately when I knowas soon as I found out about it, which is today, 7 September. I registered for this course as soon as I found out about it, which is today, 7 September.

I registered for this course immediately when I know it whichas soon as I found out what day it is today, 7the 7th of September. I registered for this course as soon as I found out what day it is today, the 7th of September.

I'm not 100% what you mean with this sentence, so I hope my interpretation is correct.

I really don't want to be a guy who issomeone with an absentce. I really don't want to be someone with an absence.

"a guy" is too colloquial given the context.

Back to the topic at hand, there are many challenges for me with language learning as a noobn amateur: Back to the topic at hand, there are many challenges for me with language learning as an amateur:

I feel like Hkust offers a lot of things to me and I don't really handletake advantage of it. I feel like Hkust offers a lot of things and I don't really take advantage of it.

I feel like Hkust offers a lot oftoo many things to me and I docan't really handle it. I feel like Hkust offers too many things to me and I can't really handle it.

I'm unsure what "Hkust" is.

Every course offers many stufftasks that needs to dobe done. Every course offers many tasks that needs to be done.

Every course offers many stuffa lot of things that needs to dobe done. Every course offers a lot of things that need to be done.

"Stuff" is usually reserved for more casual speech. "Things" is more appropriate for the written form.

I am overwhelmed but I amalso trying to blend in. I am overwhelmed but also trying to blend in.

2. My poor English basis.fundamentals 2. My poor English fundamentals

As I said, I have not been actively learning the language for two years. As I said, I have not been actively learning the language for two years.

As Ipreviously said, I have not been learning the language for two years. As previously said, I have not been learning the language for two years.

I am very new into the academic areaworld. I am very new to the academic world.

ThisIt is a big challenge for me to takebe taking such a gpreatstigious and academic English course. It is a big challenge for me to be taking such a prestigious and academic English course.

This is a big challenge for me to take on such a great academic English course. This is a big challenge for me to take on such a great academic English course.

It's a little vague what you mean by "great academic English course" here. Do you mean great as in big/ overwhelming, or do you mean great as in good/ useful?

When I geot into hkust, I feelt like there awere so many influential English Speakers, I feelt lost when I trying to talk with them, like I was being tested by a very fast listening test. When I got into hkust, I felt like there were so many fluent English Speakers, I felt lost when trying to talk with them, like I was being tested by a very fast listening test.

I have changed this into past tense. It could also be in future tense - if you have yet to be accepted onto the course, I'm not sure which is the case.

When I geot into hkust, Iit feels like there are so many influential E(?) english Sspeakers, I feel lost when I trying to talk with them, because it feels like I wasam being tested by a very fast listening test. When I got into hkust, it feels like there are so many influential(?) english speakers, I feel lost when trying to talk with them, because it feels like I am being tested by a very fast listening test.

Even though now, Grammer is keepingcontinues to editing my errors whilen I am writing this honest feeling with youmessage. Even though now, Grammer continues to edit my errors while I am writing this honest message.

Even though now, Grammer is keepings editing my errors whenas I am writing this honest feeling withly for you. Even though now, Grammer keeps editing my errors as I am writing this honestly for you.

HowWhat poor English I have, but I will still pluck up tohe courage to study this course. What poor English I have, but I will still pluck up the courage to study this course.

"Pluck up the courage" is a great phase!

HowWhat poor English I have, but I will still pluck up tohe courage to study this course. What poor English I have, but I will still pluck up the courage to study this course.

And I am very happy I can be taught by you and see you tomorrow. And I am very happy I can be taught by and see you tomorrow.