Jan. 20, 2024
Love of language and looking for lang partner!
Hi, i love languages!
well, that's a bit of weird introduction to a stranger heheh. my name is hisyam!
anyway i really like learning languages. I just feel like there is so much out there that i havent seen or even heard of in this world. With internet, all of those precious informations are only separated from me by just a simple vocabulary-grammar-database that i just havent acquired yet. I feel like im rambling now but im sure you get my point. there is just an itch all the time, for me to slowly progress and eventually uncover the goldmines behind. i feel like im patiently building windows in my house, and on the other side are things the frenchophones and anglophone(?) have been collecting the past few hundreds years. Ah, well... anyone want to be my language partner in discord? im probably lower c1 in english, studying french, native in bahasa indonesia. we can play minecraft together if ure interested, or dota2, or boardgames, or just chill! forest#1604 on discord :D
anyways, i really like learning languages.
I just feel like there is so much out there that i haven’t seen or even heard of in this world.
Hi, i! I love languages!
Probably separate these into two sentences since ideas not related.
With internet, all of those lot of precious informations are is only separated from me by just a simple vocabulary-grammar-database that i just havent acquired yet.
Would probably use "just" once there.
there is just an itch all the time, for me to slowly progress and eventually undiscover thenew goldmines behind.
Maybe I'm just uncultured but "uncover the goldmines behind" isn't a commonly used phrase.
i feel like im patiently building windows in my house, and on the other side are things the frenchophones and anglophone(?)
Not sure what this sentence is supposed to convey
we can play minecraft together if uyou're interested, or dota2, or boardgames, or just chill!
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Left most of the capitalization uncorrected.
I noticed you use "just" a good amount -- "just" something to keep an eye on!
Hi, iI love languages!
wWell, that's a bit of weird introduction to a stranger heheh.
mMy name is hisyam!
aAnyway i, I really like learning languages.
I just feel like there is so much out there that iI havent seen or even heard of in this world.
With the internet, all of those preciousso much informations are is only separated from me by just a simple vocabulary-grammar-database that i just haven't acquired yet.
Information is almost never plural.
I feel like im rambling now but iI'm sure you get my point.
tThere is just an itch all the time, for me to slowly progress and eventually uncover the goldmines behind.
I know what you mean, but this is a fairly strange sentence to read through.
iI feel like iI'm patiently building windows in my house, and on the other side are things the frenchophones and anglophone(?)
anglophone is a word, you're correct!
have been collecting the past few hundreds years.
Ah, well... anyone want to be my language partner in discord?
iI'm probably lower c1 in eEnglish, studying fFrench, natand live in bBahasa iIndonesia.
wWe can play minecraft together if uyou're interested, or dota2, or boardgames, or just chill!
You don't need to repeat the "or", except for in the last instance
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Nice job. I'd recommend taking a look at the rules for capitalisation. There's a few cases where you've forget to capitalise!
Jan. 20, 2024
Thank youuu! There are a lot of mistakes for sure. Seems like non-auto-capitalize setting in my keyboard mess my habits a lot
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I feel like im rambling now but im sure you get my point. I feel like im rambling now but |
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I just feel like there is so much out there that i havent seen or even heard of in this world. I just feel like there is so much out there that I just feel like there is so much out there that i haven’t seen or even heard of in this world. |
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Love of language and looking for lang partner! |
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Hi, i love languages! Hi, Hi Probably separate these into two sentences since ideas not related. |
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there is just an itch all the time, for me to slowly progress and eventually uncover the goldmines behind.
I know what you mean, but this is a fairly strange sentence to read through. there is just an itch all the time Maybe I'm just uncultured but "uncover the goldmines behind" isn't a commonly used phrase. |
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With internet, all of those precious informations are only separated from me by just a simple vocabulary-grammar-database that i just havent acquired yet. With the internet, Information is almost never plural. With internet, a Would probably use "just" once there. |
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well, that's a bit of weird introduction to a stranger heheh.
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my name is hisyam!
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anyway i really like learning languages.
anyways, i really like learning languages. |
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i feel like im patiently building windows in my house, and on the other side are things the frenchophones and anglophone(?)
anglophone is a word, you're correct! i feel like im patiently building windows in my house, and on the other side are things the frenchophones and anglophone(?) Not sure what this sentence is supposed to convey |
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have been collecting the past few hundreds years. have been collecting the past few hundred |
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Ah, well... anyone want to be my language partner in discord? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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im probably lower c1 in english, studying french, native in bahasa indonesia.
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we can play minecraft together if ure interested, or dota2, or boardgames, or just chill!
You don't need to repeat the "or", except for in the last instance we can play minecraft together if |
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forest#1604 on discord :D |
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