I think theat romantic love is weird, it's kind funny from my point of viuew or my experiences,. I don´t have many but three´s one in particular that, I remermber, that I feelt like wasthey were yesterday, h. He was a nice, funny, good - -looking, (good body to,o) guy, and we met in a class than we had in commuon.

Shorter sentences would be better here since the topics are changing.

When aI saw this mean, miy first thougtht was: " iI like you" but aI don´t said eidn't say anything because... honestly i I don´'t know, thais was long time ago , b. Besides for six months he and i,I becoame friends and inat one pouint, he had ia girlfriend and I was in love with another person, but in certain moments, I felt than was something amoung us, there was thigs, don´t feel the things than friends dobetween us. There were things, no infidelity, more like the littlesmall talk, the smeaiiles, the way we look beetthing used at each other.

I said thanen that V was my first love,. I was sixteen and a had a lot of hope, and a lot of things have happened since the moment aI met him, until the moment he and were face to face and in the end, we become exstrangesd.

I never had the opportunity to saidy my feelings loud, direct, and of course, never had a clearty answer, even if the two of us knew we liked each other.

Love iIs Weird

I think the romantic love is weird, is and kind funny my point of viuw or. From my experiences, I don´t have many , but theree´'s one in particular that, I remermber,. It felt like was yesterday, he was a nice, funny, good - -looking, good body to, guy, wand had a nice body. We met in a class than we had in commuon.

"From my point of view" is said before making a judgement, giving your perspective. But what you are doing here is going into a story - describing an experience.

When aI saw this mean, miy first thougtht was:, " iI like you," but aI don´t said eidn't say anything because... honestly i , I don´'t know, thas wasit was a long time ago , besides for . For the next six months, he and i,I becoame friends, and inat one pouint he had ia girlfriend and I was in love with another person, but in. But there were moments, where I felt than was something amoungbetween us,; there was thigs, don´t feel the things than friends do,ere feelings stronger than just being friends. But there was no infidelity, it was more like the little talkhings we would say, the smeaiiles, the way we look beetthing uswould look at each other.

"Between" involves two people, in this case, you and the man.
"Among" involves more than two people

I saidy thant V was my first love,. I was sixteen and a lot of hop, a. A lot of things happened since the moment aI met him, until the moment he and I were face -to -face, and in the end, we become exstrangers.

I'm not sure what you meant by "a lot of hop." maybe "and very happy"?

I never had the opportunity to saidy my feelings out loud, directly, and of cours,e, I never had a clearty answer, from him, even if the two of us knew we liked each other.

Thanks for taking the time to check my disaster of a text and my love story.

I think the romantic love is weird, it’s kind of funny in my point of viuew or my experiences,. I don´’t have many experiences, but theree´ was one in particular that, I remermber,. I feelt like it was yesterday, he was a nice, funny, good - looking, good body too, guy, w. We met in a class than we had in commuon.

When aI saw this mean, miy first thougtht was:, " iI like you" but aI don´t said eidn’t say anything because... honestly i I don´’t know, t. Thast was a long time ago , b. Besides, for six months he and i,I becoame friend and ins. At one pouint he had ia girlfriend and I was in love with another person, but in those moments, I felt thant there was something amoungbetween us, there wasere things, don´ that didn’t feel like the things than t friends do,. There was no infidelity, more like the little talks, the smeaiiles, the way we looked beetthingtween us.

I said thant V was my first love,. I was sixteen and a lot of hop, a lot of things had happened since the moment aI first met him, until the moment he and I were face to face and in the end, we becoame exstrangers.

I never had the opportunity to saidy my feelings loud, direct, and of course, never had a clearty answer, e. Even if the two of us knew we liked each other.