Sept. 24, 2024
It is so sad when our relationship is changed. Today I said my closely friend about things in our communication when I really don’t like. I feel free and scared to lose a friend but I think it was necessary.
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It iwas so sad when our relationship is changed.
Today, I saitold my closely friend about things inabout our communication when( relationship) that I really doidn’t like.
I feel free andliberated but also scared to lose a friend, but I think it was necessary.
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Technically yours is correct and very stylistic. The correction is a question whereas your original is a statement you are posing as a question.
It is so sad whento see our relationship is changed.
Your original sentence is correct but it’s very awkward because “is” is present tense and “changed” is past tense, so I made the entire sentence present tense.
This allowed me to add “see” which makes the sentence less passive.
Today I saidtalked to my closely friend about things inaspects of our communication whenthat I really don’t like.
I think you are trying to say that you had a conversation with your friend about rough parts in your communication.
When you use “when” it sounds like you’re saying you had a conversation but you did not want to talk.
I feel free andam glad I talked to him but I am scared to lose a friend but. I think it was necessary.
Your original is correct, but you are saying “free” in a very metaphorical sense so I think “glad I talked” sounds better. Since “scared to lose a friend” is a sad thing and the first part is a happy thing we use “but” instead of and.
Using two conjunctions (and, but, etc.) in one sentence is not always easy so I would recommend making the second part a new sentence.
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I am sorry to hear you had a rough conversation with your friend. I hope you two can work things out 💕
Love Is Living 3 Years? Is Love Technically yours is correct and very stylistic. The correction is a question whereas your original is a statement you are posing as a question.
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It is so sad when our relationship is changed. It is so sad Your original sentence is correct but it’s very awkward because “is” is present tense and “changed” is past tense, so I made the entire sentence present tense. This allowed me to add “see” which makes the sentence less passive. It |
Today I said my closely friend about things in our communication when I really don’t like. Today I I think you are trying to say that you had a conversation with your friend about rough parts in your communication. When you use “when” it sounds like you’re saying you had a conversation but you did not want to talk. Today, I |
I feel free and scared to lose a friend but I think it was necessary. I Your original is correct, but you are saying “free” in a very metaphorical sense so I think “glad I talked” sounds better. Since “scared to lose a friend” is a sad thing and the first part is a happy thing we use “but” instead of and. Using two conjunctions (and, but, etc.) in one sentence is not always easy so I would recommend making the second part a new sentence. I feel |
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