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daigorou

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Love

How do people fall in love?
Most of my classmates have a boyfriend, but I don't understand them.
Why are they interested in others? Why do they want to talk with others?
There is no person who I want to become familiar relationship.
I wonder if I find such one.

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Love

How do people fall in love?

Most of my classmates have a boyfriend, but I don't understand them.

Why are they interested in others?

There is no persone who I want to become familiarhave a close relationship with.

This sentence was a little awkward, so I changed it. Here you need "with" after "relationship".

I wonder if I find suchwill find one.

You could also say "such a one" but it would maybe sound a little dated.

Feedback

I think it's fine if there's no one you're interested in right now. It's not like you have to be in a relationship to be happy. If you do want to find someone then I'm sure you will given time.

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daigorou

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Thank you!
I'll think it through carefully.

Love


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How do people fall in love?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Most of my classmates have a boyfriend, but I don't understand them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why are they interested in others?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why do they want to talk with others?


There is no person who I want to become familiar relationship.


There is no persone who I want to become familiarhave a close relationship with.

This sentence was a little awkward, so I changed it. Here you need "with" after "relationship".

I wonder if I find such one.


I wonder if I find suchwill find one.

You could also say "such a one" but it would maybe sound a little dated.

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