July 9, 2025
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
I was amazed by the lovely flowers. They were really pretty.
I took some picture of them, but at the time the flowers were all closed.
I've heard the flowers open early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon around 5.
That's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
This year, I finally took the pictures of the flowers in bloom.
The pink flowers and big green pads were so pretty.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know this place.
I kind of want to keep it secret.
去年の7月私の町で蓮の花でうめつくされた沼を見つけました。
私は、そのかわいらしい花に心を動かされました。本当にかわいらしかったんです。
私は、何枚か写真を撮りましたが、その時、花は全部閉じていました。
私は、蓮の花は朝早く咲くと聞いたことがあります。
私は、そこに午後5時ころ行きました。
だから咲いている花の写真を撮ることができませんでした。
今年、ついにその花が咲いている写真を撮ることができました。
ピンクの花と緑の大きな葉っぱがほんとに可愛かったです。
正直、私の町の人たち、この場所を知らないと思います。
なんとなく、秘密にしておきたいです。
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
I was amazed by the lovely flowers.
They were really pretty.
I took some pictures of them, but at the time the flowers were all closed.
I've heard the flowers openbloom early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon, around 5.
That's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
The sentence is correct, but I think it is more natural to combine sentences here! I went in the afternoon, around 5, which is why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
This year, I finally took the pictures of the flowers in bloom.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know about this place.
I kind of want to keep it secret.
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I don't think I've ever seen lotus flowers in person, it must be so magical to see them in bloom :) I'm glad you got to take pictures.
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! Yes, it was so magical^^
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
This sentence is okay, but you can also remove "a lot of" since you already used "filled".
They were really pretty.
I took some pictures (or "a picture") of them, but at the time the flowers were all closed. (or: "the flowers' petals were all closed.")
I've heard that the flowers open early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon at around 5.
That's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
This year, I finally took the pictures of the flowers in bloom.
The pink flowers and big green pads were so pretty.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know about this place.
I kind of want to keep it secret.
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Well done! The sight of so many lotus flowers in bloom must be amazing.
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! Yes, it was so pretty, I could be there forever.
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
I was amazed by the lovely flowers.
They were really pretty.
I took some picture of them, but at the time, the flowers were all closed.
I've heard the flowers open early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon around 5five.
That's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
This year, I finally took the pictures of the fblowers in bloomoming flowers.
The pink flowers and big green pads were so prettygorgeous/marvelous.
I'm giving synonyms to increase your vocabulary.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know this place.
I kind of want to keep it a secret.
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections and new vocabulary.
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
I was amazed by the lovely flowers.
They were really pretty.
I took some pictures of them, but at the time the flowers were all closed.
I've heard the flowers open early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon around 5.
That's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
This year, I finally took the pictures of the flowers in bloom.
The pink flowers and big green pads were so pretty.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know this place.
I kind of want to keep it secret.
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
July 9, 2025
その蓮華の写真を見たい！ 🌸
July 9, 2025
You can go to my Instagram, "sachi_frappucchino" to see the flowers.
Lotus Flower
Last July, I discovered a pond filled with a lot of lotus flowers in my town.
I was amazed by the lovely flowers.
They were really pretty.
I took some pictures of them, but at the time the flowers were all closed.
Make sure to remember plurals when using some.
I've heard the flowers open early in the morning.
I went there in the afternoon around 5.
TSo that's why I didn't get to take any pictures of the flowers blooming.
Makes the sentence flow better
The pink flowers and big green pads were so pretty.
Honestly, I don't think most people in my town know this place.
I kind of want to keep it secret.
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Good job
July 9, 2025
Nice job
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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