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SanHang

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Third, security also is a significant one in immigrant issues. For border security, President Trump had built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs. For local technological security, President Trump is narrowing the release of visas. Because of the Chinese government, CCP,’s plan, called Thousand Talents Plan which was established in 2008 by the central government of China. CCP sends people to America to steal American local technology. President Trump’s decision on immigrants could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.
Final, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far further American the future. But on the other hand, his decision will damage countless small companies that mainly employ cheap laborers. Naught lies down, naught takes up.

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Third, security also is a significant one intopic in regards to immigrant issues.

For border security, President Trump hads built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs.

Because of the Chinese government, CCP,’'s plan, called Thousand Talents Plan, which was established in 2008 by the central government of China.,

replace the period with a comma to connect it to the next sentence. You cannot have a sentence with 'because' without also stating the result.

CCP sends people to America to steal American local technology.

President Trump’s decision relating ton immigrants could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.

Finally, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far furon ther American the future.

But oOn the other hand, his decision will damage countless small companies that mainly employ cheap laborers.

Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I don't know what this means.

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SanHang

Oct. 31, 2020

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Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I mean Gains and loses
Nought lie down, nought take up

do you have any idea to rewrite this one?
thank you

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bajuwa

Oct. 31, 2020

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The only thing I can think of right now is "Everything has its pros and cons." But I'm not sure it has the equivalent poetic effective you seemed to be looking for.

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SanHang

Oct. 31, 2020

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get it that is what I want to say
by the way, if you have any questions about my correction please let me know.

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Third, security is also is a significant onchallenge in immigrant issues.

For border security, President Trump hads built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs.

BThis is because of the Chinese government,'s CCP,’s plan, called the Thousand Talents Plan which was established in 2008 by the central government of China.

The CCP sends people to America to steal local American local technology.

President Trump’s decision on immigrantstion could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.

Finally, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far further American the future.

But on the other hand, his decision will damage countless smaller companies that mainly employ cheap laborers.

Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I don't know what you're trying to say here.

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Just a few corrections!

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SanHang

Oct. 31, 2020

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Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I mean Gains and loses
Nought lie down, nought take up

do you have any idea to rewrite this one

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SanHang

Oct. 31, 2020

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and thank your corrections~

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Third, security also is a significant one in immigrant issues.


Third, security is also is a significant onchallenge in immigrant issues.

Third, security also is a significant one intopic in regards to immigrant issues.

For border security, President Trump had built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs.


For border security, President Trump hads built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs.

For border security, President Trump hads built border walls between Mexico and the U.S. to prevent smuggling guns, people, and drugs.

For local technological security, President Trump is narrowing the release of visas.


Because of the Chinese government, CCP,’s plan, called Thousand Talents Plan which was established in 2008 by the central government of China.


BThis is because of the Chinese government,'s CCP,’s plan, called the Thousand Talents Plan which was established in 2008 by the central government of China.

Because of the Chinese government, CCP,’'s plan, called Thousand Talents Plan, which was established in 2008 by the central government of China.,

replace the period with a comma to connect it to the next sentence. You cannot have a sentence with 'because' without also stating the result.

CCP sends people to America to steal American local technology.


The CCP sends people to America to steal local American local technology.

CCP sends people to America to steal American local technology.

President Trump’s decision on immigrants could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.


President Trump’s decision on immigrantstion could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.

President Trump’s decision relating ton immigrants could directly abate the risk and protect local technology.

Final, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far further American the future.


Finally, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far further American the future.

Finally, Trump’s revolution on immigration is astute and will have a positive influence far furon ther American the future.

But on the other hand, his decision will damage countless small companies that mainly employ cheap laborers.


But on the other hand, his decision will damage countless smaller companies that mainly employ cheap laborers.

But oOn the other hand, his decision will damage countless small companies that mainly employ cheap laborers.

Naught lies down, naught takes up.


Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I don't know what you're trying to say here.

Naught lies down, naught takes up.

I don't know what this means.

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