Dec. 8, 2022
I went to a hospital for a checkup today.
I went to there by subway, but I didn't know where I was because I went out a different exit than usual.
During I checked where I was in Google Maps app on my smartphone, an old lady approached me and asked the way to a restaurant.
I thought in my heart that “I'm lost too, so I don't know,” but when I looked around, I saw a signboard of the restaurant, so I told her.
I was glad to able to tell her.
I could get to the hospital soon after that.
今日は健康診断のために病院に行きました。
地下鉄で行ったのですが、いつもと違う出口から出てしまったので、自分がどこにいるのか分からなくなりました。
スマホのグーグルマップアプリで自分の位置を確認していると、おばあさんが近づいてきて、店の場所を聞かれました。
(私も迷ってるのでわからないです)と心の中で思いましたが、見渡したら看板が見えたので教えてあげました。
教えてあげられてよかったです。
そのあとすぐに病院にたどり着けました。
I went to a hospital for ato get checkuped today.
People usually don't go to a hospital for a checkup, a hospital is suppose to be used if you have what you consider an emergency condition that requires immediate care. Usually you go to a doctor's office for a checkup.
I went to there by subway, but I didn't know where I was because I went out a different exit than usual.
'to' is not required here.
During the commute I checked where I was ion Google Maps app on my smartphone, when an old ladywoman approached me and asked me the way to a restaurant.
'During', what did you check. Please clarify when you did the checking. Using 'old woman' here is more polite than 'old lady'.
I thought in my heart that “I'm lost too, so I don't know, the way to the restaurant” but when I looked around, I saw a signboard ofor the restaurant, so I told her.
Using 'of the restaurant' here makes it sound like the signboard was used to make the signboard.
I was glad to able to thellp her.
'Help' is more appropriate here than 'tell'.
I couldwas able to get to the hospital soon after that.
Could sounds awkward here
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I was able to understand the message here, just a few changes to the text to make this message an easier read.
Lost
I went to a hospital for a checkup today.
I went to there by subway, but I didn't know where I was because I went out a different exit than usual.
During IAs I was checkeding where I was in Google Maps app on my smartphone, an old lady approached me and asked the way to a restaurant.
I thought into my heart thatself, “I'm lost too, so I don't know,” but when I looked around, I saw a signboard of the restaurant, so I told her.
I was glad to be able to tell her.
Lost
I went to athe hospital for a checkup today.
I went to there by subway, but I didn't know where I was because I went out a different exit than usual.
During IAs I was checkeding where I was in Google Maps app on my smartphone, an old lady approached me and asked me the way to a restaurant.
I thought into my heart thatself, “I'm lost, too, so I don't know,” but when I looked around, I saw a signboard of for the restaurant, so I told her.
よかった!
I was glad to be able to thellp her.
In the US, we usually say, "I'm glad I could help" so-and-so. It's like a set phrase.
I could get to the hospital soon after that.
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いいですね。上手に書けています。
I went to athe hospital for a checkup today.
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I thought in my heartd that “I'm lost too, so I don't know,” b. But when I looked around, I saw a signboard of the restaurant, s. So I told her.
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I went to there by subway, but I didn't know where I was because I went out a different exit than usual. I went I went I went I went 'to' is not required here. |
During I checked where I was in Google Maps app on my smartphone, an old lady approached me and asked the way to a restaurant.
During the commute I checked where I was 'During', what did you check. Please clarify when you did the checking. Using 'old woman' here is more polite than 'old lady'. |
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I was glad to able to tell you. |
I got to the hospital soon after that. |
I could get to the hospital soon after that. I This sentence has been marked as perfect! I Could sounds awkward here |
I was glad to able to tell her. I was glad to be able to In the US, we usually say, "I'm glad I could help" so-and-so. It's like a set phrase. I was glad to be able to tell her. I was glad to able to 'Help' is more appropriate here than 'tell'. |
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