Nov. 15, 2021
Loss
My father walked into the kitchen and told me that Uncle Ye had died, when I was eating a persimmon after lunch. I was a little surprised and just responded, "ha?" He repeated himself twice. I inquired once more to ensure that I had fully grasped the situation. "How?" I inqired. My father said,"he was taken to the city hospital at 10 o'clock last night. The doctor requested that he perform a by-pass operation, but he declined. He passed away this morning at 8 o'clock." I was really stunned because I had seen him a few days before, and he looked so good. Furthermore, I had never heard that he has any heart problems. I had lunch with him in August, he was the person who ordered the menu. All the food were pretty healthy. He also had a good attitude of life: eat heathily, do exercise, and never be upset. He seldom argued with someone, since he always talked slow and in a low voice. What he expected was retirement. According to all these, I thought he would live for decades.
I am also confused that when he was in hospital, his wife still stayed at home instead of staying by his side. The distance was only 30 km between her residence and the hospital. His niece was the only one who stayed with him. Until this morning, his wife still stayed at home, and was noticed his dead by the doctor. Why did he refuse to get surgery? It seemed that he desired to live a long time. I would never get the answer, never. Things happened in a flash. Life is so fragile.
All I can do now is enjoy my life.
Loss
My father walked into the kitchen and told me that Uncle Ye had died, when I was eating a persimmon after lunch.
I was a little surprised and just responded, "ha?"
It's not technically wrong but it's more common to say "huh?" in English.
He repeated himself twice.
I inquired once more to ensure that I had fully grasped the situation.
"How?"
I inquired.
My father said,"he was taken to the city hospital at 10 o'clock last night.
The doctor requested that he perform a by-pass operation, but he declined.
He passed away this morning at 8 o'clock."
I was really stunned because I had seen him a few days before, and he looked so good.
It's not incorrect but it would sound more natural to say "he looked perfectly fine/healthy". Saying someone looked good implies they looked attractive.
Furthermore, I had never heardknown that he hasd any heart problems.
I had lunch with him in August, he was the person who ordered the menu.
All the food wereas pretty healthy.
He also had a good attitude ofabout life: eat healthily, do exercise, and never be upset.
He seldom argued with someanyone, since he always talked slow and in a low voice.
What he expected was retirement.
According toBecause of all theseat, I thought he would live for decades.
I am also confused thatbecause when he was in the hospital, his wife still stayed at home instead of staying by his side.
The distance was only 30 km between her residence and the hospital.
His niece was the only one who stayed with him.
Until this morning, his wife still stayed at home, and was noticfied of his deadth by the doctor.
Why did he refuse to get surgery?
It seemed that he desired to live a long time.
I wouldill never get the answer, never.
Things happened in a flash.
Life is so fragile.
All I can do now is enjoy my life.
Feedback
I'm so sorry for your loss. It's so hard to deal with death when it's so quick and unexpected.
Nov. 16, 2021
Thank you.
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My father walked into the kitchen and told me that Uncle Ye had died, when I was eating a persimmon after lunch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was a little surprised and just responded, "ha?" I was a little surprised and just responded, "ha?" It's not technically wrong but it's more common to say "huh?" in English. |
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He repeated himself twice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I inquired once more to ensure that I had fully grasped the situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My father said,"he was taken to the city hospital at 10 o'clock last night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The doctor requested that he perform a by-pass operation, but he declined. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He passed away this morning at 8 o'clock." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was really stunned because I had seen him a few days before, and he looked so good. I was really stunned because I had seen him a few days before, and he looked so good. It's not incorrect but it would sound more natural to say "he looked perfectly fine/healthy". Saying someone looked good implies they looked attractive. |
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Furthermore, I had never heard that he has any heart problems. Furthermore, I had never |
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I had lunch with him in August, he was the person who ordered the menu. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All the food were pretty healthy. All the food w |
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He also had a good attitude of life: eat heathily, do exercise, and never be upset. He also had a good attitude |
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He seldom argued with someone, since he always talked slow and in a low voice. He seldom argued with |
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What he expected was retirement. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to all these, I thought he would live for decades.
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I am also confused that when he was in hospital, his wife still stayed at home instead of staying by his side. I am also confused |
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The distance was only 30 km between her residence and the hospital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His niece was the only one who stayed with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Until this morning, his wife still stayed at home, and was noticed his dead by the doctor. Until this morning, his wife still stayed at home |
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Why did he refuse to get surgery? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seemed that he desired to live a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would never get the answer, never. I w |
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Things happened in a flash. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Life is so fragile. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All I can do now is enjoy my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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