Nov. 27, 2019
Losing My Brother's Cap
Few weeks ago, I had forgot my brother's cap at the train and when I had realized, the train had left to staition. I had been looking at behind of the train like a little child who lost her candy. I thought to replace with same or buy a different cap. This was hard to decide, I ended up buying new one. The new cap is arrived yesterday and I put it at him head, and it didn't suit on him.
Now, I have a new cap.
FA few weeks ago, I had forgotten my brother's cap aton the train and when I had realized, the train had already left to staition.
I thad been looking at behind of theed at the back train like a little child who lost heris candy.
This was hard to decide, but I ended up buying new one.
The new cap is arrived yesterday and I put it at him head, and it didn't suit on him.
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NSo now, I have a new cap.
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So you still need to get your brother a new cap :D
Dec. 2, 2019
I thad been looking at behind of theed at the back train like a little child who lost heris candy.
Can I ask, why her turn to his in there?
Dec. 2, 2019
Infact, my brother is really cool about it. He said, "There is no need to buy new one." But, I felt bad about it. If I found something that he want, I am going to buy for him.
Dec. 2, 2019
Can I ask, why her turn to his in there?
I changed the gender because usually the subject in expressions like "taking candy from a baby" (which is not the same you used, but is close) is male (also you brother is male). So, it sounded a bit better for me but it was not really a grammatical error in itself.
Dec. 2, 2019
I see. Thank you.
Losing My Brother's Cap
FA few weeks ago, I had forgotten my brother's cap aton the train and when I had realized, the train had left tohe staition.
I had been looking at behindthe back of the train like a little child who lost her candy.
I thought abouto replace with saming it with a similar one or buying a different cap.
The new cap is arrived yesterday and I put it aton hims head, and it didn't suit on him.
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Dec. 2, 2019
Thank you for correction!
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Few weeks ago, I had forgot my brother's cap at the train and when I had realized, the train had left to staition.
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I had been looking at behind of the train like a little child who lost her candy. I had been looking at I th |
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I thought to replace with same or buy a different cap. I thought about |
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This was hard to decide, I ended up buying new one. This was hard to decide, but I ended up buying new one. |
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The new cap is arrived yesterday and I put it at him head, and it didn't suit on him. The new cap
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Now, I have a new cap.
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