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milkyway

Jan. 19, 2024

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Losing Culture

I checked the results of the lottery number of New Year's cards with a lottery number.
The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery number is announced around January 17th each year.
The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards to my parents and 10 cards to me, total about 40.
Of these, only one card won the drawing, and I got a sheet containing two stamps.
The number of people who don't send New Year's cards is increasing because of the spread of the Internet.
The culture to send New Year's cards might be almost disappeared after 10 years.
It might be lucy, if you are a foreigner and you get some New Year's cards from Japanese now.


消えゆく文化
お年玉付き年賀はがきの当選確認をした。
お年玉付き年賀はがきは、年賀状に付いている番号がくじになっていて、1月17日くらいに当選番号が発表される。
今年の年賀状は、両親に来たのが30枚ほど、私に来たのが10枚で、合わせて40枚ほどだった。
そのうち当選は、3等の切手シートが1枚だけだった。
ネットの普及で年賀はがきを出さない人も増えている。
年賀はがきを出す文化は、あと10年もしたら、ほとんど無くなっているかもしれない。
もしあなたが外国人で今日本人から年賀状をもらっていたら、ラッキーかもしれない。

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I checked the results of the lottery number ofrom the New Year's cards with a lottery number.

The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery number is announced around January 17th each year.

The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards tofor my parents and 10 cards tofor me, totaling about 40.

Of these, only one card won the drawing, and. I got a sheet containing two stamps.

The number of people who don't send New Year's cards is increasing because of the spread of the Internet.

The culture tof sending New Year's cards might be almost disappeared after in 10 years.

It might be lucy, if you are a foreigner and you get some, you should get New Year's cards from Japanese now.

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milkyway

Jan. 22, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

Losing Culture

I checked twhe results of the lottery number ofther the New Year's cards with a lottery numbers were winners.

The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery numbers is announced around January 17th each year.

The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards tofor my parents and 10 cards tofor me, totaling about 40.

Of these, only one card /won the drawing/was a winner/, and I got a sheet containing two stamps.

The number of people who don't send New Year's cards is increasing because of the spread of the Internet.

The culture to send New Year's cards might be almostnearly disappeared in/after 10 years.

It might be lucky, if you are a foreigner and you get somea New Year's cards from Japanese people now.

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I'm glad you had a winning card!

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milkyway

Jan. 22, 2024

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Thank you!

Losing Culture


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I checked the results of the lottery number of New Year's cards with a lottery number.


I checked twhe results of the lottery number ofther the New Year's cards with a lottery numbers were winners.

I checked the results of the lottery number ofrom the New Year's cards with a lottery number.

The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery number is announced around January 17th each year.


The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery numbers is announced around January 17th each year.

The winning numbers of the New Year's cards with a lottery number is announced around January 17th each year.

The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards to my parents and 10 cards to me, total about 40.


The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards tofor my parents and 10 cards tofor me, totaling about 40.

The New Year's cards in this year, there were about 30 cards tofor my parents and 10 cards tofor me, totaling about 40.

Of these, only one card won the drawing, and I got a sheet containing two stamps.


Of these, only one card /won the drawing/was a winner/, and I got a sheet containing two stamps.

Of these, only one card won the drawing, and. I got a sheet containing two stamps.

The number of people who don't send New Year's cards is increasing because of the spread of the Internet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The number of people who don't send New Year's cards is increasing because of the spread of the Internet.

The culture to send New Year's cards might be almost disappeared after 10 years.


The culture to send New Year's cards might be almostnearly disappeared in/after 10 years.

The culture tof sending New Year's cards might be almost disappeared after in 10 years.

It might be lucy, if you are a foreigner and you get some New Year's cards from Japanese now.


It might be lucky, if you are a foreigner and you get somea New Year's cards from Japanese people now.

It might be lucy, if you are a foreigner and you get some, you should get New Year's cards from Japanese now.

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