Nov. 4, 2020
Looking forward to this Saturday
Another 3 days I should start work again.
I think my injured right lag is recover up to 70%.
So, on Friday I will insist the doctor to allow me start working!
This accident was happened at 21th Oct.
The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area.
That also prove I am an old man now.
In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will be completely heal.
Also, thanks to “generation” is change.
In the old date I may just stay at home do nothing.
Now, through the internet in last 2 weeks I already make few new friends.
Looking forward to actually meet them.
LI'm looking forward to this Saturday
Another 3 days I should startand I will be working again.
I think my injured right lag ihas recovered up to 70%.
So, on Friday I will insist theat my doctor to allows me to start working again!
ThisMy accident was happened at 21th Octon the 21th of October.
TheI'm lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area.that only my muscles got hurt and not my bones.
ThatMy injury also proves that I am an old man now.
In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will beys, it used to take me only 4 to 5 days to completely heal.
Also, thanks to the “generation” is change.
I'm not sure what you mean by this, but grammatically it is fine.
In the old date I may justpast, I would stay at home and do nothing.
Now, throughanks to the internet in last 2 weeks I, I've already makede a few new friends. in the past two weeks.
LI'm looking forward to actually meeting them in person.
Nov. 4, 2020
thanks to “generation” is change.
i try to say "old generation to new generation"
old generation no smart phone no internet, now (new generation it got all)
Nov. 4, 2020
I would say thanks to technological advances. To me, a generational change is caused by culture and ideas.
In another 3 days I should start work again.¶
¶
Or: Another 3 days until I should be able to start work again.
I think my injured right laeg is recover up to 70%. recovered
"around 70% recovered" sounds a little more natural to me, but up to 70% also works
So, on Friday I will insist that the doctor to allow me start working!
This accident was happened aton 21th Oct.
The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area.
In my younger days ite may only take 4, or 5 days I willand I would be completely healed.
In the old dateys, I may just stay at home doing nothing while injured.
Feedback
I couldn't quite understand what was meant by "Also, thanks to “generation” is change.". But otherwise everything was very easy to understand, and I just left some suggestions to make things sound a bit more natural.
Nov. 4, 2020
thanks to “generation” is change.
i try to say "old generation to new generation"
old generation no smart phone no internet, now (new generation it got all)
|
Looking forward to this Saturday
|
|
Another 3 days I should start work again. In another 3 days I should start work again.¶ Another 3 days |
|
I think my injured right lag is recover up to 70%. I think my injured right l "around 70% recovered" sounds a little more natural to me, but up to 70% also works I think my injured right lag |
|
So, on Friday I will insist the doctor to allow me start working! So, on Friday I will insist that the doctor So, on Friday I will insist th |
|
This accident was happened at 21th Oct. This accident
|
|
The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area. The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area.
|
|
That also prove I am an old man now.
|
|
In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will be completely heal. In my younger days it In my younger da |
|
Also, thanks to “generation” is change. Also, thanks to the “generation” I'm not sure what you mean by this, but grammatically it is fine. |
|
In the old date I may just stay at home do nothing. In the old da In the |
|
Now, through the internet in last 2 weeks I already make few new friends. Now, th |
|
Looking forward to actually meet them.
|
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium