Aug. 30, 2024
Looking Forward то Autumn
September is almost here. At this time of year, the sun sets earlier, and the days get shorter, which can be a bit depressing to me. However, in recent years, I look forward to autumn coming. We have experienced long crazy heat this summer in Japan, and nighttime temperatures have not yet dropped below 25 degrees in my area. Moreover, early autumn is the rainy season. On rainy or cloudy days, the temperature usually doesn’t rise much.
However, autumn is typhoon season in Japan. Actually, a super typhoon is currently passing through the Japanese archipelago, causing a lot of damage including floods and mudslides. I cannot help but feel how greatly we humans can be affected by natural phenomena.
Due to global warming, our perception of the seasons is definitely changing. For example, the autumn leaves season is gradually getting later. This is because temperatures remain relatively high even on late autumn. In addition, the rising sea temperatures are bringing about various changes in fish species and populations. Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
もうすぐ9月です。この時期は日が沈むのが早くなり、日が短くなるので、少し憂鬱になります。しかし、ここ数年は秋が来るのが楽しみです。今年の日本は猛暑が続き、私の住む地域では夜間の気温がまだ25度を下回っていません。また、初秋は雨の季節です。雨や曇りの日は、気温があまり上がりません。
しかし、日本では秋は台風の季節です。実は、現在、超大型台風が日本列島を通過しており、洪水や土砂崩れなど多くの被害が出ています。人間が自然現象に大きく左右されるのを実感せずにはいられません。
地球温暖化により、季節の感じ方は確実に変化しています。例えば、紅葉の季節は徐々に遅くなっています。これは、晩秋でも気温が比較的高いためです。また、海水温の上昇により、魚の種類や生息数にさまざまな変化が生じています。季節のレシピも変わる可能性があります。
Looking Forward тTо Autumn
September is almost here.
At this time of year, the sun sets earlier, and the days get shorter, which can be a bit depressing to me.
However, in recent years, I look forward to autumn coming.
We have experienced long crazy heat this summer in Japan, and nighttime temperatures have not yet dropped below 25 degrees in my area.
Moreover, early autumn is the rainy season.
On rainy or cloudy days, the temperature usually doesn’t rise much.
However, autumn is also typhoon season in Japan.
I think it’s better to include “also” since you mentioned that autumn is rainy season, and now you’re adding on more information.
ActuallyIn fact, a super typhoon is currently passing through the Japanese archipelago, causing a lot of damage including floods and mudslides.
I think “in fact” is more similar to 実は. Or “in actuality”. “Actually” doesn’t fit here as a transition.
I cannot help but feel how greatly we humans can be affected by natural phenomena.
Due to global warming, our perception of the seasons is definitely changing.
For example, the autumn leaves season is gradually getting later.
This is because temperatures remain relatively high even oin late autumn.
In addition, the rising sea temperatures are bringing about various changes in fish species and populations.
Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
Aug. 30, 2024
丁寧な添削とコメント、ありがとうございました。
Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
Any ingredients that change seasonally in Japan?
Aug. 30, 2024
谢谢您的问题。 在日本，有一些季节限定的食材，比如春天的竹笋、夏天的西瓜、秋天的松茸和三马。
Looking Forward тоto Autumn
September is almost here.
At this time of year, the sun sets earlier, and the days get shorter, which can be a bit depressing to me.
However, in recent years, I look forward to autumn coming.
Sounds a little more natural, but either is fine really.
We have experienced long, crazy heat this summer in Japan, and nighttime temperatures have not yet dropped below 25 degrees in my area.
Moreover, early autumn is the rainy season.
On rainy or cloudy days, the temperature usually doesn’t rise much.
However, autumn is typhoon season in Japan.
Actually, a super typhoon is currently passing through the Japanese archipelago, causing a lot of damage, including floods and mudslides.
I cannot help but feel how greatly we humans can be affected by natural phenomena.
Due to global warming, our perception of the seasons is definitely changing.
For example, the autumn leaves season is gradually getting later.
This is because temperatures remain relatively high even oin late autumn.
In addition, the rising sea temperatures are bringing about various changes in fish species and populations.
Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
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Aug. 30, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and comment.
Looking Forward то Autumn
September is almost here.
At this time of year, the sun sets earlier, and the days get shorter, which can be a bit depressing to me.
However, in recent years, I have looked forward to autumn coming.
We have experienced longa crazy long heat this summer in Japan, and nighttime temperatures have not yet dropped below 25 degrees in my area.
Moreover, early autumn is the rainy season.
On rainy or cloudy days, the temperature usually doesn’t rise much.
However, autumn is typhoon season in Japan.
Actually, a super typhoon is currently passing through the Japanese archipelago, causing a lot of damage including floods and mudslides.
I cannot help but feel how greatly we humans can be affected by natural phenomena.
Due to global warming, our perception of the seasons is definitely changing.
For example, the autumn leaves' season is gradually getting later.
This is because temperatures remain relatively high even oin late autumn.
In addition, the rising sea temperatures are bringing about various changes in fish species and populations.
Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
Aug. 30, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Looking Forward тоTo Autumn
September is almost here.
At this time of year, the sun sets earlier, and the days get shorter, which can be a bit depressing to me.
However, in recent years, I look forward to autumn coming.
We have experienced long crazy heat this summer in Japan, and nighttime temperatures have not yet dropped below 25 degrees in my area.
Moreover, early autumn is the rainy season.
On rainy or cloudy days, the temperature usually doesn’t rise much.
However, autumn is typhoon season in Japan.
Actually, a super typhoon is currently passing through the Japanese archipelago, causing a lot of damage including floods and mudslides.
I cannot help but feel how greatly we humans can be affected by natural phenomena.
Due to global warming, our perception of the seasons is definitely changing.
For example, the autumn leaves season is gradually getting later.
This is because temperatures remain relatively high even oin late autumn.
In addition, the rising sea temperatures are bringing about various changes in fish species and populations.
Seasonal recipes also may be subject to change.
Aug. 30, 2024
いつもありがとう。
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