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alexwong2164

Dec. 17, 2020

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Looking back 2020

Last year was simple to talk about.

No good news at all.

When you think that was worst.

This year is much worst then last year.

Still some good “things” happen to me.

(March) Find a really good job that I can’t complain.

Hope this job can help me to complete other dreams.

(January) Manage to make a new Japanese friend.

Hopefully someday will meet each other.

(November) Manage to loss few pounds of my fat body.

Hopefully someday can transfer to a “muscle man body”.

(November) A lucky bicycle accident. Why is lucky?

Because I can end up broken the bone instead just damaged the muscle.

What about your 2020?

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Looking back at 2020

NThere was no good news at all.

When you thinkI thought that was worst.

TBut this year is much worst then last year.

Still some good “things” happened to me.

(March) Fi: I found a really good job that I can’t complain about.

HI hope this job can help me to complete my other dreams.

(January): Managed to make a new Japanese friend.

Hopefully someday we will meet each other.

(November): Managed to losse a few pounds ofrom my fat body.

Hopefully someday I can transfer orm into a “muscle man body”.

(November): A lucky bicycle accident.

Why iswas it lucky?

Because I canould have ended up with a broken the bone but instead just damaged the muscle.

Feedback

I had a quiet year. Nothing bad happened so I'm happy about that!

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alexwong2164

Dec. 17, 2020

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thanks

hope you well

Looking back on 2020

NThere was no good news at all.

WhenIf you think that was worst.bad,

Tthis year is much worste thean last year.

Combine with previous sentence

Still, some good “things” happened to me.

(March) Fiound a really good job that I can’t complain about.

HI hope this job can help me to completachieve other dreams.

(January) Managed to make a new Japanese friend.

Hopefully someday we will meet each other.

(November) Managed to losse few pounds off of my fat body.

Hopefully someday can transfer toit will become a “muscle man body”.

(November) A lucky bicycle accident.

Why iswas it lucky?

Because I can end up brokeninstead of breaking the bone instead, I just damaged the muscle.

What about your 2020?

Feedback

Sounds like you had a year full of interesting events! Hope you are pleasantly surprised by 2021!

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alexwong2164

Dec. 17, 2020

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you too

Hopefully someday will meet each other.


Hopefully someday we will meet each other.

Hopefully someday we will meet each other.

(January) Manage to make a new Japanese friend.


(January) Managed to make a new Japanese friend.

(January): Managed to make a new Japanese friend.

Looking back 2020


Looking back on 2020

Looking back at 2020

Last year was simple to talk about.


No good news at all.


NThere was no good news at all.

NThere was no good news at all.

When you think that was worst.


WhenIf you think that was worst.bad,

When you thinkI thought that was worst.

This year is much worst then last year.


Tthis year is much worste thean last year.

Combine with previous sentence

TBut this year is much worst then last year.

Still some good “things” happen to me.


Still, some good “things” happened to me.

Still some good “things” happened to me.

(March) Find a really good job that I can’t complain.


(March) Fiound a really good job that I can’t complain about.

(March) Fi: I found a really good job that I can’t complain about.

Hope this job can help me to complete other dreams.


HI hope this job can help me to completachieve other dreams.

HI hope this job can help me to complete my other dreams.

(November) Manage to loss few pounds of my fat body.


(November) Managed to losse few pounds off of my fat body.

(November): Managed to losse a few pounds ofrom my fat body.

Hopefully someday can transfer to a “muscle man body”.


Hopefully someday can transfer toit will become a “muscle man body”.

Hopefully someday I can transfer orm into a “muscle man body”.

(November) A lucky bicycle accident.


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(November): A lucky bicycle accident.

Why is lucky?


Why iswas it lucky?

Why iswas it lucky?

Because I can end up broken the bone instead just damaged the muscle.


Because I can end up brokeninstead of breaking the bone instead, I just damaged the muscle.

Because I canould have ended up with a broken the bone but instead just damaged the muscle.

What about your 2020?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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