Feb. 13, 2022
Looking After My Kids
Because my wife went out by her business today, I spent time taking care of my kids alone.
About 4 years ago, it was very hard to look after them by myself, because they couldn't do anything without parents' helping.
Nowadays, they grow and they can play together without parents.
It was also easy because I could understand their meanings because they could make complete sentences.
In my opinion, I can play with them less than 5 years.
Someday, they will play with their friends just like my old days.
Until the day, I will try to make many memories for them.
Because my wife went out byto her business today, I spent time taking care of my kids alone.
About 4 years ago, it was very hard to look after them by myself, because they couldn't do anything without their parents' helping.
Nowadays, they grow and that they are older they can play together without parentsal supervision.
It was also easyier because I could understthey cand their meanings because they could makeell me what they need in complete sentences.
In my opinion, I can play with them less than 5 years.
Unclear meaning.
Feb. 18, 2022
Thank you so much.
Because my wife went out byto her business today, I spent time taking care of my kids alone.
About 4 years ago, it was very hard to look after them by myself, because they couldn't do anything without their parents' helping.
Nowadays, they growhave grown up, and they can play together without their parents.
It wais also easy because I couldan understand their meanings because they could make complete sentences.
Changed from past tense to present tense because I assume you are talking about now.
In my opinion, I can play with them when they are less than 5 years old.
Until the day, I will try to make many memories forwith them.
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Feb. 14, 2022
Thank you so much!
Because my wife went out byto her business today, I spent time taking care of my kids alone.
About 4 years ago, it was very hard to look after them by myself, because they couldn't do anything without parents'our helping.
Nowadays, they groware growing up and they can play together without parents.
It was also easy because I could understand their meanings becausem and they could make complete sentences.
In my opinion, I can't play with them if they have less than 5 years.
I am not sure what you wanted to say with this sentence.
Someday, they will play with their friends just like my old days.I did when I was young.
Until theat day, I will try to make many memories for them.
Feb. 13, 2022
Thank you so much.
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Someday, they will play with their friends just like my old days. Someday, they will play with their friends just like |
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Until the day, I will try to make many memories for them. Until th Until the day, I will try to make many memories |
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