Jan. 29, 2023
For Most of people, they maybe keen to have a long life. Dreamed about travelling around the world and celebrated 100 birthday with great-grand-son and so on. For sure this is based on the premise that in a healthy condition. However, my grandma is over 90. But She is not really appreciate about this long life she has. Losing friends every year is what she keeps complaning about. This year, two more of her friends passed away. She said nobody to talk with anymore. Lonely haunted her. And the day-time become too long since the sleeping hour is reduced. It doesn't sound lovely with a long life. Is oneliness the fate of human beings?Do you want to have a long life?
Longevity
For Most of people, they may be keen to have a long life.
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For sure this is based on the premise that they are in a healthy condition.
However, mMy grandma is over 90.
But She is not really appreciateive, however, about thishow long a life she has had.
Losing friends every year is what she keeps complaning about.
This year, two more of her friends passed away.
She said there's nobody to talk with any more.
Poor Grandma. :(
Lonelyiness haunteds her.
This is a beautiful sentence.
And tThe day- time has become too long since the sleeping hour is reducnumber of her sleeping hours has decreased.
It doesn't sound lovely withto have a long life.
Is loneliness the fate of human beings?Do you want to have a long life?
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Good questions! I need to think about it more. Good work!
For MI think most of people, they maybe keen look forward to haveing a long life.,
maybe -> "i think"
keen is not used much to describe desires
Ddreameding about travelling around the world and celebrateding their 100th birthday with their great-grand-son and so on.
For sureAs a matter of fact, this is based on the premise that in a healthy conditionassumption that they are healthy.
But She idoes not really appreciate about thisher long life she has.
Losing friends every year is what she keeps complaining about.
This year, two more of her friends passed away.
She said she has nobody to talk withto anymore.
Lonelyiness haunteds her.
And the day-times become too longer since tshe sleeping hour is reduceds less.
It doesn't sound lovely with a long life(from her perspective), a long life sounds more like a curse than a blessing.
Is loneliness the fate of human beings?Do Would you want to have a long life?
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you write very beautifully.
And the day-time become too long since the sleeping hour is reduced. And the day
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Longevity This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
For Most of people, they maybe keen to have a long life.
maybe -> "i think" keen is not used much to describe desires
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Dreamed about travelling around the world and celebrated 100 birthday with great-grand-son and so on.
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For sure this is based on the premise that in a healthy condition.
For sure this is based on the premise that they are in a healthy condition. |
However, my grandma is over 90.
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But She is not really appreciate about this long life she has.
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Losing friends every year is what she keeps complaning about. Losing friends every year is what she keeps complaining about. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
This year, two more of her friends passed away. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
She said nobody to talk with anymore. She said she has nobody to talk She said there's nobody to talk with any more. Poor Grandma. :( |
Lonely haunted her. Lonel Lonel This is a beautiful sentence. |
It doesn't sound lovely with a long life.
It doesn't sound lovely |
Is oneliness the fate of human beings?Do you want to have a long life? Is loneliness the fate of human beings? Is loneliness the fate of human beings?Do you want to have a long life? |
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