July 25, 2025
Long time no journaling
After a long time of stopping journaling, I found that hmm, nothing.
Perhaps it was kind of difficult to me because since I was a kid, I always feel like no one would to listen to me.
All they would do is mocking, judge, even they wouldn’t listen to me at all.
So I found myself recently - few months - I couldn’t sleep well, I always get tired, miserable, if lucky, I can sleep after 30’ of bedtime, if it’s not, it could be 2-3 hours in my bed, some night I don’t sleep at all, like literally up to 5am, then maybe I can sleep, then after waking up, it would have been afternoon, and I feel dizzy all day.
After saw a guy post his/her journaling on LangCorrect, my head popped up: “maybe I should try to start journaling again.”
Yeah, after writing a few sentences, I feel a bit better to be honest. Hopefully I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, a tough life.
Long time, no journaling
After a long time ofafter having stoppinged journaling, I found that, hmm,... nothing.
Perhaps it was kind of difficult tofor me, because, ever since I was a kid, I've always feelt like no one would to listens to me.
All they would do is mocking me, judge, even they wouldn’ me, or just not listen to me at all.
So I found mysel, as of recently -(a few months - I couldago), I find that I can’t sleep well,. I always get tired, miserable, ifand, if I'm lucky, I can fall asleep after 30’ of bedtime, if it’s not minutes of lying in bed. Otherwise, it could be up to 2-3 hours in my bed, and some nights I don’t sleep at all, l. Like, literally up toill 5am, then, maybe, I can sleep,. But then afterwhen I wakinge up, it would have been's already afternoon, and I feel dizzy all day.
Sorry, but this sentence is a mess. I tried my best.🥲
After I saw a guy post his/her journaling on LangCorrect, my headit popped upinto head: “maybe I should try to start journaling again.”
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Yeah, after writing a few sentences, I feel a bit better to be honest.
Hopefully, I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, – a tough, busy life.
I couldn't tell you why, but "a tough, busy life" sounds better to me than "a busy, tough life" lol. I'm sure there's an English rule for that.
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This is actually great and you sound very natural, just watch out for punctuation and run-on sentences!
July 27, 2025
My post was a mess. I appreciate your help!
Long time no journaling
After a long time of stopping journaling, I found that hmm, nothing.
Perhaps it was kind of difficult to me because since I was a kid, I always feel like no one would to listen to me.
All they would do is mocking me, judge, even they wouldn’t listen to me at all.
This is more natural.
So I found myself recently - for the past few months - I couldn’t sleep well, I always get tired, miserable, ifI’m lucky, if I can sleep after 30’ of30 minutes after bedtime, if it’s not, it could be 2-3 hours in my bed, some nights I don’t sleep at all, like literally up to 5am, then maybe I can sleep, then after waking up, it would have been afternoon, and I feel dizzgroggy all day.
Corrected some minor mistakes and made the sentences sound more natural.
After saw a guy post his/her journaling on LangCorrect, my headit popped up:into my head “maybe I should try to start journaling again.”
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Yeah, after writing a few sentences, I feel a bit better to be honest.
Made a sentence more natural.
Hopefully I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, and tough life.
Natural to use and here since you’re including something.
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So I found myself recently - few months - I couldn’t sleep well, I always get tired, miserable, if lucky, I can sleep after 30’ of bedtime, if it’s not, it could be 2-3 hours in my bed, some night I don’t sleep at all, like literally up to 5am, then maybe I can sleep, then after waking up, it would have been afternoon, and I feel dizzy all day. So I found myself recently - for the past few months - I couldn’t sleep well, I always get tired, miserable, Corrected some minor mistakes and made the sentences sound more natural. So Sorry, but this sentence is a mess. I tried my best.🥲 |
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Hopefully I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, a tough life. Hopefully I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, and tough life. Natural to use and here since you’re including something. Hopefully, I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life I couldn't tell you why, but "a tough, busy life" sounds better to me than "a busy, tough life" lol. I'm sure there's an English rule for that. |
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