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hiratecs

Dec. 1, 2024

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Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days. I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played by lots of toxic people. Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed. That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologically healthy experience. Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes. I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it. They end up losing hours that could be used to more productive activities, like learning a new language haha. Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago). If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.

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Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days.

Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x 5 vs. 5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

That's why I stopped playing,; it was not a psychologically healthy experience.

colon : might also work

I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't jusjust can't leave it.

"can't just" would mean they have to do something else besides leaving it

They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Nowadays, I only play it occasionally and betweenwith long intervals between playing throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).

maybe you mean "through the years" if you don't play for multiple years at a time

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I was warned by friends in school not to get involved with League. I'm glad you found a way to enjoy it in a healthy way :)

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Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to losekill some time and to rememberinisce on the old days.

A frase tá correto, mas eu alterei pra que soasse mais natural

I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played by lots of toxic people.

Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

That's why I stopped playing,; it was not a psychologically healthy experience.

Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes.

I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.

They end up losing/wasting hours that could be used to more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Exatamente kkk

Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).

If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.

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hiratecs

Dec. 2, 2024

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Thanks again!

Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to losespend some time and to remember the old days.

I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played by lots of toxic people.

Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches, and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologicmentally healthy experience.

I would say "mentally" over "psychologically" because we have the term "mental health".

Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes.

I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.

They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).

If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.

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Excellent! I agree, my brother and friends play League of Legends and I've heard them rage before. I tried playing it a while ago, but simply didn't enjoy it much. Glad that you're prioritizing other experiences that you enjoy!

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hiratecs

Dec. 2, 2024

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Thank you very much!

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Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop, called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days.

I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played byfilled with lots of toxic people/players.

more natural

Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5xv5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologically healthy experience.

Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes.

I'm glad I managed to step back/step away from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.

Step away from something is a more commonly used phrase.

They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).

If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.

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Great writing, very natural and understandable. I've never tried Leauge of Legends, but I've heard that it's very toxic and addictive. Glad you didn't get sucked into it!

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hiratecs

Dec. 2, 2024

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Thank you!

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Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days.


Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop, called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days.

Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to losespend some time and to remember the old days.

Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to losekill some time and to rememberinisce on the old days.

A frase tá correto, mas eu alterei pra que soasse mais natural

Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days.

I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played by lots of toxic people.


I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played byfilled with lots of toxic people/players.

more natural

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Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.


Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5xv5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches, and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

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Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x 5 vs. 5 team game, the players are constantly stressed.

That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologically healthy experience.


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That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologicmentally healthy experience.

I would say "mentally" over "psychologically" because we have the term "mental health".

That's why I stopped playing,; it was not a psychologically healthy experience.

That's why I stopped playing,; it was not a psychologically healthy experience.

colon : might also work

Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes.


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I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.


I'm glad I managed to step back/step away from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.

Step away from something is a more commonly used phrase.

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I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it.

I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't jusjust can't leave it.

"can't just" would mean they have to do something else besides leaving it

They end up losing hours that could be used to more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.


They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

They end up losing/wasting hours that could be used to more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Exatamente kkk

They end up losing hours that could be used tofor more productive activities, like learning a new language haha.

Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).


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Nowadays, I only play it occasionally and betweenwith long intervals between playing throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago).

maybe you mean "through the years" if you don't play for multiple years at a time

If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.


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