May 9, 2020
LOCKDOWN?
Due to covid-19, many countries are in lockdown. Of course this is one way to stop the spread of the virus, but does it really benefit "everyone"? The answer is, absolutely not. Because of lockdown, many people are losing their jobs. In some countries, people cannot even have enough food.This is a really serious and difficult problem, because if a country puts an end to lockdown, the virus will be the next big problem. There are countries that are doing anything to stop the spread of the disease, and a good example for this is Brazil. Is Brazilian president wrong? Many people would say yes, but think twice. He is doing nothing , because lockdown will cause many problems and it is just that he thought those problems would be more serious than the virus. I am not saying that what he is doing is completely right. i am saying you have to stop and think again before you say it is right or wrong. Many people will suffer in either way, and we do not have a clear answer to that.
In some countries, people cannodon't even have enough food / people can't even afford food.This is a really serious and difficult problem, because if a country puts an end to lockdown, the virus will be the next big problem.
Is Bthe brazilian president wrong?
He is doing nothing , becauseas lockdown will cause many problems and it is just that he just thought those problems would be more serious than the virus.
i am saying you have to stop and think again before you say it is right or wrong.
Many people will suffer in either way, and we do not have a clear answer to that.
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Small corrections, almost everything you said made perfect sense, my corrections were just to make it sound more natural.
Because of the lockdowns, many people are losing their jobs.
I think "lockdowns" is best because different countries each have their own lockdown.
In some countries, people cando not even have enough food. This is a really serious and difficult problem to solve, because if a country puts an end to their lockdown, the virus will be the next big problem.
The other user's suggestion is fine, too.
There are countries that are doing anything they can to stop the spread of the disease, and a. A good example ofor this is Brazil.
Many people would say yes, but they should think twice.
Many people will suffer in either way, and. In short, we do not have a clear answer to thatsolution to the problem.
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Very nice job. I made a few additional suggestions.
May 10, 2020
Thank you!
LOCKDOWN?
Due to covidCOVID-19, many countries are in lockdown.
COVID is an acronym, which means it is usually capitalized.
Of course this is one way to stop the spread of the virus, but does it really benefit "everyone"?
I wouldn't put this is quotations, personally. Unless you were going for a sarcastic tone, which you may have been.
The answer is, absolutely not.
Because of the lockdown, many people are losing their jobs.
In some countries, people cannot even have enoughafford food. This is a reallvery serious and difficult problem, because i. If a country puts an end to their lockdown, the virus will become the next big problem.
There are countries that are doing aneverything to stop the spread of the disease, and a good example ofor this is Brazil.
Is the Brazilian president wrong?
Many people would say yes, but think twice.
He is doing nothing , because the lockdown will cause many problems and it is just that h. He thought those problems would be more serious than the virus.
I am not saying that what he is doing is completely rightthe right thing.
iI am saying you have to stop and think again before you say it is right or wrong.
Many people will suffer in either way, and we do not have a clear answer to that.
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Good work, just a bit clunky to read and some basic grammar mistakes.
May 10, 2020
There are countries that are doing aneverything to stop the spread of the disease, and a good example ofor this is Brazil.
are not doing anything*
May 10, 2020
In some countries, people cannot even have enoughafford food. This is a reallvery serious and difficult problem, because i. If a country puts an end to their lockdown, the virus will become the next big problem.
what's the difference between vey and really?
May 10, 2020
what's the difference between vey and really?
very*
May 11, 2020
are not doing anything*
Are you correcting yourself or did I misunderstand? From your original statement I assumed you meant they were doing everything in their power, not that they weren't doing anything.
May 11, 2020
what's the difference between vey and really?
They are synonyms, but I felt 'very' was more natural in this case and aided the flow of the sentence. Some words don't fit the tone of the topic at hand. For a more extreme example of this, imagine a medical journal and where they say 'tummy' rather than 'stomach'. Although the difference between 'really' and 'very' is more minute and is more my personal opinion than anything.
May 11, 2020
Are you correcting yourself or did I misunderstand? From your original statement I assumed you meant they were doing everything in their power, not that they weren't doing anything.
I meant he's doing nothing to stop the spread of the virus because he thinks the lockdown would cause the problem of unemployment.
So maybe you misunderstood but thanks for your corrections.
May 11, 2020
They are synonyms, but I felt 'very' was more natural in this case and aided the flow of the sentence. Some words don't fit the tone of the topic at hand. For a more extreme example of this, imagine a medical journal and where they say 'tummy' rather than 'stomach'. Although the difference between 'really' and 'very' is more minute and is more my personal opinion than anything.
oh okay, thank you
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Due to covid-19, many countries are in lockdown. Due to COVID is an acronym, which means it is usually capitalized. |
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Of course this is one way to stop the spread of the virus, but does it really benefit "everyone"? Of course this is one way to stop the spread of the virus, but does it really benefit I wouldn't put this is quotations, personally. Unless you were going for a sarcastic tone, which you may have been. |
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The answer is, absolutely not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of lockdown, many people are losing their jobs. Because of the lockdown, many people are losing their jobs. Because of the lockdowns, many people are losing their jobs. I think "lockdowns" is best because different countries each have their own lockdown. |
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In some countries, people cannot even have enough food.This is a really serious and difficult problem, because if a country puts an end to lockdown, the virus will be the next big problem. In some countries, people cannot In some countries, people The other user's suggestion is fine, too. In some countries, people |
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There are countries that are doing anything to stop the spread of the disease, and a good example for this is Brazil. There are countries that are doing There are countries that are doing anything they can to stop the spread of the disease |
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Is Brazilian president wrong? Is the Brazilian president wrong? Is |
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Many people would say yes, but think twice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Many people would say yes, but they should think twice. |
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He is doing nothing , because lockdown will cause many problems and it is just that he thought those problems would be more serious than the virus. He is doing nothing He is doing nothing , |
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I am not saying that what he is doing is completely right. I am not saying that what he is doing is |
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i am saying you have to stop and think again before you say it is right or wrong.
i am saying you have to stop and think |
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Many people will suffer in either way, and we do not have a clear answer to that. Many people will suffer Many people will suffer Many people will suffer |
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