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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 20, 2021

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In the past, I used to go travel twice a year for travel or business trip.

Because of COVID-19, it isn't allowed, so many people include me go to domestic trips.

This way, some places which haven't been popular, are full of tourists.

The travelers can see good places and the sellers in the tourist attractions ear a profile.

So it is a win-win.

I hope this pandemic come to an end soon, and will travel to abroad again.

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Local Trip

In the past, I used to go traveling twice a year for travelholidays or business trips.

Because of COVID-19, it isn't allowed, so many people includeing me go ton domestic trips.

This wayBecause of this, some places which havweren't been popular before, are now full of tourists.

The travelers can see good places and the sellers in the tourist attractions ear a profile.

Not sure what 'ear a profile means'...

So it is a win-win.

I hope this pandemic come to an end soon, and will travel to abroad again.

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Hopefully, we can all travel in the near future!

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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 21, 2021

402

Thank you for your corrections.

Local Trip


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In the past, I used to go travel twice a year for travel or business trip.


In the past, I used to go traveling twice a year for travelholidays or business trips.

Because of COVID-19, it isn't allowed, so many people include me go to domestic trips.


Because of COVID-19, it isn't allowed, so many people includeing me go ton domestic trips.

This way, some places which haven't been popular, are full of tourists.


This wayBecause of this, some places which havweren't been popular before, are now full of tourists.

The travelers can see good places and the sellers in the tourist attractions ear a profile.


The travelers can see good places and the sellers in the tourist attractions ear a profile.

Not sure what 'ear a profile means'...

So it is a win-win.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope this pandemic come to an end soon, and will travel to abroad again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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