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March 7, 2024

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The Smell of Curry

One day, I took the elevator to the restaurant area on the upper floor of the building.
There was a couple in the elevator first.
When the elevator started to go up a woman said “I felt smell or curry so much,”” and other man said “Sure, I smell of curry too.”
I thought, “I couldn’t smell anything but there might be a curry restaurant in the building and they might smell it.”
At that time I ate spaghetti or something and then went home.
When I took off my coat, I remembered the couple talking about the smell of curry, then I stuck my face into my coat and smelled it.
Then I felt smell or curry from the coat.
It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.
Oh no, that was me! I was so embarrassed.
However I don’t know why the coat smells like this.


カレーの匂い

ある日、私はビルの上階にあるレストラン街に向かうため、エレベーターに乗った。
そのエレベーターには、先にカップルが乗っていた。
エレベーターが上昇を始めたときに、女性の方が「すごくカレーの匂いがするね」と言った。男性も「確かにカレーの匂いがするね」と言った。
私は、(何も匂わないけど、レストラン街にはカレー屋さんもあるだろうから、その匂いがしているんだろう)と思った。
その日は、スパゲティか何かを食べてから帰った。
そして、家に帰ってコートを脱いてから、ふと「カレーの匂い」の話を思い出して、コートに顔を突っ込んで臭ってみた。
カレーの匂いがしたw まるでカレー粉をかぶったような匂いがする。
やば。あれ私のことだったのか。恥ずかしい〜。と一人で悶えた。
でもなぜこんな匂いがするか分からない。

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March 10, 2024

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The Smell of Curry

When I took off my coat, I remembered the couple talking about the smell of curry, then I stuck my face into my coat and smelled it.

It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.

Oh no, that was me!

I was so embarrassed.

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milkyway

March 10, 2024

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The Smell of Curry

It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.

Oh no, that was me!

I was so embarrassed.

However I don’t know why the coat smells like this.

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March 10, 2024

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The Smell of Curry

Oh no, that was me!

I was so embarrassed.

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March 8, 2024

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One day, I took the elevator to the restaurant area on the upper floor of the building.

There was a couple in the elevator first.

It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.

Oh no, that was me!

I was so embarrassed.

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March 8, 2024

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March 12, 2024

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It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.

Oh no, that was me!

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milkyway

March 7, 2024

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One day, I took the elevator to the restaurant area on the upper floor of the building.

Oh no, that was me!

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It smelled like it was covered in curry powder.


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