May 5, 2023
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I want now to speak about the chosen. It's story about Jesus and his apostle. At this episode Jesus is coming but just someone know him. It's cool because we can understand the context of this story. Sometime we can to read the gospel like a book but people say that he was god but also a man. He have friend and they apostle have joice and problem. I thing about peter. It's first pope but both a people that he give information against his jews brother. His wife cry because she dont recognize her husband : he play game, he dont make shabbat. He said : "who is your faith ?"
It's cool because sometime when we read the gospel we dont remember all of that he dont write. It's not importante but to understand well we need open us eyes of the story of this guy.
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It's app that we can add to yYoutube.
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I can keepsave any unknown words and study them with qQuizlet.
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I want now to speak about the chosen (noun needed). I want now to speak about the chosen (noun needed).
I'm not sure about the topic, but you need a noun after chosen. Unless this is a title of a book, then you'd capitalise it.
It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles.
AtIn this episode Jesus is coming, but just someone knowalready knows of him.
In this episode Jesus is coming, but just someone already knows of him.
It's cool, because we can understand the context ofit gives us more context to understand thise story.
It's cool, because it gives us more context to understand the story.
Sometimes we can to read the gospel like a book, but people say that he was not only a god, but also a man. Sometimes we can to read the gospel like a book, but people say that he was not only a god, but also a man.
He haves friends and they apostles have joiceys and problems.
He has friends and the apostles have joys and problems.
I'm not sure if you meant "joys" here.
I thingk about pPeter.
I think about Peter.
It's first pope, but both a people that he give information against were his jewsish brothers.
It's first pope, but both people that he give information against were his jewish brothers.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean here.
His wife cryied because she donidn't recognize her husband : h. He played games, he donand he didn't make shabbat.
His wife cried because she didn't recognize her husband. He played games, and he didn't make shabbat.
He said :, "whoat is your faith ?"
He said, "what is your faith?"
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It's cool because sometimes when we read the gospel, we don't remember all of that he dont e things that were unwriteten.
It's cool because sometimes when we read the gospel, we don't remember all of the things that were unwritten.
It's not importante, but to understand it well we need open usour eyes tof the story of this guy.
It's not important, but to understand it well we need open our eyes to the story of this guy.
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Good writing!
To learn eEnglish, iI use lLanguage rReactor.
To learn English, I use Language Reactor.
It's an app that we can add to yYoutTube.
It's an app that we can add to YouTube.
I can keep track of unknown words and study them with qQuizlet.
I can keep track of unknown words and study them with Quizlet.
Now, I want now to speak about the chosen.
Now, I want to speak about the chosen.
If "the chosen" is a proper noun, like the name of a book or video, you need to capitalize the title.
It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles.
AtIn this episode Jesus is coming, but just someone persone knows him.
In this episode Jesus is coming, but just one person knows him.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. If there are 0 people who know Jesus, you can say "but nobody knows him." If there is one person who knows Jesus, use my correction above.
It's cool because we can understand the context of this story.
Sometimes, we can to read the gGospel like a book but p. People say that he was gGod but also a man.
Sometimes, we can read the Gospel like a book. People say that he was God but also a man.
Since the two halves of your sentence don't relate to each other, you need to separate them with a period, or use a conjunction that will explain the connection.
He haves friends, and theyse apostles have joiceys and problems.
He has friends, and these apostles have joys and problems.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
I thingk about pPeter.
I think about Peter.
It'sHe was the first pope, but both a people that hehe also giave information against his jJewsish brothers.
He was the first pope, but he also gave information against his Jewish brothers.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
If you're saying Peter was against the Jewish people in general, rather than one specific person, use "brothers" or "brethren." If you use "brother" (singular) it indicates you're talking about a specific person.
His wife cryied because she donidn't recognize her husband : he played games, he donidn't make shabbat.
His wife cried because she didn't recognize her husband: he played games, he didn't make shabbat.
You might want to say "observe Shabbat" instead, but I'm not Jewish so I am not positive on the preferred wording.
He said :, "wWho is your faith ?"
He said, "Who is your faith?"
Do you mean "Where is your faith?"
It's cool because sometimes when we read the gGospel, we don't remember all of that he donidn't write.
It's cool because sometimes when we read the Gospel, we don't remember all that he didn't write.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
It's not importante, but to understand well, we need open usour eyes of the story of this guy.
It's not important, but to understand, we need open our eyes of the story of this guy.
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I want now to speak about the chosen.
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It's story about Jesus and his apostle. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. It's a story about Jesus and his apostles. |
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At this episode Jesus is coming but just someone know him.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. If there are 0 people who know Jesus, you can say "but nobody knows him." If there is one person who knows Jesus, use my correction above.
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It's cool because we can understand the context of this story. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Sometime we can to read the gospel like a book but people say that he was god but also a man.
Sometimes, we can Since the two halves of your sentence don't relate to each other, you need to separate them with a period, or use a conjunction that will explain the connection. Sometimes we can to read the gospel like a book, but people say that he was not only a god, but also a man. Sometimes we can to read the gospel like a book, but people say that he was not only a god, but also a man. |
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He have friend and they apostle have joice and problem.
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I thing about peter.
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It's first pope but both a people that he give information against his jews brother.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. If you're saying Peter was against the Jewish people in general, rather than one specific person, use "brothers" or "brethren." If you use "brother" (singular) it indicates you're talking about a specific person.
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His wife cry because she dont recognize her husband : he play game, he dont make shabbat.
His wife cr You might want to say "observe Shabbat" instead, but I'm not Jewish so I am not positive on the preferred wording.
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He said : "who is your faith ?
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It's cool because sometime when we read the gospel we dont remember all of that he dont write.
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It's not importante but to understand well we need open us eyes of the story of this guy.
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