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repezendelivery344

April 19, 2021

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I study with my friends these days

I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered for work. However, some of my friends are near my living place. So, I study with them every week. I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student. When I study something with my friends, I can focus on it more than I study alone because I can watch at them who make an effort to do something, and I got the motivation. Until I study abroad, I'm going to brush up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry.

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I study with my friends these days

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repezendelivery344

April 20, 2021

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I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student.

Not sure I understand what you mean here. Maybe leave me a comment and I can help?

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April 23, 2021

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I learn English, my friends look for a job, and the others study a specialized field because she is a graduate student.

However, some of my friends are near my living place.


However, some of my friends arlive near my living placee, so I study with them every week. However, some of my friends live near me, so I study with them every week.

I study with my friends these days


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I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered for work.


I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered forbecause of work. I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered because of work.

So, I study with them every week.


So, I study with them every week.

Best not to start sentences with "so"

I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student.


I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student. I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student.

Not sure I understand what you mean here. Maybe leave me a comment and I can help?

When I study something with my friends, I can focus on it more than I study alone because I can watch at them who make an effort to do something, and I got the motivation.


When I study something with my friends, I can focus on it more'm more focused than when I study alone because I can watch at them who make an effort to do something, and I got thesense their effort and gain motivation. When I study something with my friends, I'm more focused than when I study alone because I can sense their effort and gain motivation.

"The motivation" = the motivation to do *something* in particular. This one is used less often. "Motivation" (with no article) = motivation in general, as a feeling or experience. This is used more often.

Until I study abroad, I'm going to brush up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry.


Until I study abroad, I'm going to keep brushing up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry. Until I study abroad, I'm going to keep brushing up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry.

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