Dec. 15, 2020
Dec. 14, 2020 The decoretions for Christmas
I like all the decoretions for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that only use for few days a year. I need to spend a lots of maney to buy them, a lots of time to collect them, also a lots of space to store them. So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decoreting.
This year I find a solar laser light which is very convenience and interesting. The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow of my front yard. It will shine the gree and red moving light pattern on the wall. It looks plenty and beautiful. It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about to setting up the cable or something. It's super easy. Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. The battery couldn't work outside. I hope the temperature can go up next week.
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Dec. 14, 2020 The decoreations for Christmas/ Christmas Decorations
Dec. 14, 2020 The decorations for Christmas/ Christmas Decorations
I like all the decoreations for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that are only used for few days within a year.
I like all the decorations for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that are only used for few days within a year.
I need to spend a lots of maoney to buy them, a lots of time to collect them, also a lots ofnd have enough space to store them.
I need to spend a lot of money to buy them, collect them, and have enough space to store them.
So, I always prefer to choose something simple things for decoretingo decorate with.
So, I always prefer to choose something simple to decorate with.
This year, I fiound a solar laser light, which is very convenience andt to use and it's also interesting.
This year, I found a solar laser light, which is very convenient to use and it's also interesting.
The only thing that I need to do is to putshine it ionto the snow ofin my front yard.
The only thing I need to do is to shine it onto the snow in my front yard.
It will shine thes green and red moving light patterns on the wall.
It shines green and red moving light patterns on the wall.
It looks plenty andso beautiful.
It looks so beautiful.
It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about to setting up thea cable or someanything like that.
It uses solar power, so I don't need to worry about setting up a cable or anything like that.
Only one thing was overn my mind and that was it's too cold this past few days to set it up.
Only one thing was on my mind and that was it's too cold this past few days to set it up.
I hope the temperature can go upet warmer next week.
I hope the temperature can get warmer next week.
"get warmer" is more of a colloquial saying.
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Christmas decorations can be very flamboyant, and it's very expensive as well. The lights you have sound very beautiful and I hope you have the chance to display them soon. It'd look amazing reflecting on the snow. In the US, it's common for families to drive around neighborhoods and look at the Christmas light displays.
This is a bit over the top for me, but here are some examples: https://www.thecuttingedgelandscape.com/7-christmas-light-displays-in-orange-county-that-will-blow-your-mind/
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you so much for your correction and expaining. I'm living in Canada now. I think there's very similar culture with US. There are many beautiful decorates around my neighborhood. That's why I bought the light, because I thought I need to do shomething too.:P
Dec. 14, 2020 The decoreations for Christmas
Dec. 14, 2020 The decorations for Christmas
I like all the decoreations for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that I only use for few days a year.
I like all the decorations for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that I only use for few days a year.
I need to spend a lots of maoney to buy them, a lots of time to collect them, alsond a lots of space to store them.
I need to spend a lot of money to buy them, a lot of time to collect them, and a lot of space to store them.
So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decoreating.
So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decorating.
This year, I fiound a solar laser light which is very conveniencet and interesting.
This year, I found a solar laser light which is very convenient and interesting.
The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow ofin my front yard.
The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow in my front yard.
It will shine the green and red moving light pattern on the wall. It will shine the green and red moving light pattern on the wall.
It looks plenretty and beautiful.
It looks pretty and beautiful.
It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about to setting up the cable or someanything.
It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about setting up the cable or anything.
Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days.
There is a phrase, "went over my head" to describe when you don't understand something. I don't know if that fits with this sentence. Maybe saying "The only problem is that it was too cold the past few days." is better
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Good luck with your solar lights!
Dec. 15, 2020
The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow ofin my front yard.
I'm always confusing about the "in", “of", "for", "on"...Is there some rules for them? Or they are just like custom or usual?
Dec. 15, 2020
Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days.
There is a phrase, "went over my head" to describe when you don't understand something. I don't know if that fits with this sentence. Maybe saying "The only problem is that it was too cold the past few days." is better
Mmm, I wanted to say " I was surprised", I didn't expect that it happen. but it was a bad surprise. How should I express it? Thank you
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you very much!
Dec. 16, 2020
Mmm, I wanted to say " I was surprised", I didn't expect that it happen. but it was a bad surprise. How should I express it? Thank you
Okay, you could say "I was shocked how cold it was the past few days". In the flow of the writing I think it would be better to say, "There was one problem, I didn't expect it to be so cold the past few days."
The phrase "there was one problem..." lets the reader know that you will introduce the problem.
Dec. 17, 2020
I get it. Thank you so much!
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Dec. 14, 2020 The decoretions for Christmas
Dec. 14, 2020 The decor
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I like all the decoretions for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that only use for few days a year.
I like all the decor
I like all the decor |
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I need to spend a lots of maney to buy them, a lots of time to collect them, also a lots of space to store them.
I need to spend a lot
I need to spend a lot |
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So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decoreting.
So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decor
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This year I find a solar laser light which is very convenience and interesting.
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The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow of my front yard.
The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow
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It will shine the gree and red moving light pattern on the wall. It will shine the green and red moving light pattern on the wall. It will shine the green and red moving light pattern on the wall.
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It looks plenty and beautiful.
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It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about to setting up the cable or something.
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Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. There is a phrase, "went over my head" to describe when you don't understand something. I don't know if that fits with this sentence. Maybe saying "The only problem is that it was too cold the past few days." is better
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I hope the temperature can go up next week.
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