April 3, 2021
I write poems and want to write songs. So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day. I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice. But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while. Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it`s so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs. So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice. But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while. Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it's so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs.
So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day.
I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
"I will" is often said/written as "I'll".
I've wanted to play guitar after I had been in a'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.
I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.
My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice.
But I didn`t't really like that song really, so I gave up the practice after a while.
But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while.
Then I began to practice and gave up it some times during my lifeseveral times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play the guitar.
Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play the guitar.
I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercisesmy practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.
I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.
And I see my progress, and it`'s so exciting!
And I see my progress and it's so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day. So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. |
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I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. "I will" is often said/written as "I'll". |
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I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager.
I've wanted to play guitar after I |
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My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice. |
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But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while.
But I didn |
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Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar.
Then I began to practice and gave up |
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I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter.
I have breaks in my practice now too, but |
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And I see my progress, it`s so exciting!
And I see my progress |
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I write poems and want to write songs. |
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So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. |
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I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. |
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I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager. |
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My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice. |
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But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while. |
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Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar. |
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I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter. |
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And I see my progress, it's so exciting! |
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