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Tammy

July 31, 2024

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Living with Purpose

I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really love it, so I decided to use it as my today's title.

The writing prompt is this: Describe your life goals but do not mention wealth, places you want to go to or live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people.

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and healthy. To be specific: I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging. Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight. My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.

The second goal is to keep learning. Improving my English level is one of them. I've been trying to practice my spoken English on Duolingo for half an hour daily and write 4 or 5 entries here every week.

The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to the persons involved. As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself since I can remember things. I don't want to live a vague and grouchy life like my mother. I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myself in front of the people involved. -- I didn't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

This entry seems a little long, then I'll stop here.

Have a nice day!


刚改了一个如题的中文日志,很喜欢,所以决定用它作为我今天的标题。

写作提示是这样的:描述你的生活目标,但不要提及财富、你想去或住的地方、你理想的工作,或与其他人的关系。

对我来说,第一个目标是保持锻炼和健康。具体来说:我想通过日常锻炼来保持健康,比如徒步旅行、瑜伽和慢跑。因为我还在与COVID-19的后遗症作斗争,近期目标是每天晚上睡个好觉,恢复到之前的体重。每天的指标是练习一小时瑜伽或慢跑超过1万步,每周的指标是在每天的目标上增加一次徒步旅行。

第二个目标是不断学习。提高英语水平就是其中之一。我试着每天在多邻国练习半个小时的英语口语,每周在这里写4到5条。

第三是记录和回顾我的感受和想法,并与相关人沟通。作为一名中国女性,从记事起,我就被告知要为别人着想,忽略自己。我不想像我母亲那样过着含糊其辞、郁郁寡欢的生活。我相信我是自己生活的主人,必须在相关的人面前表明自己。——这部分我做得不好,但我正在努力改进。

这篇有点儿长了,那么到此为止吧。

祝好!

Corrections

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and stay healthy.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelaelasting effects of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

Sequelae is a very specific word, I had to look it up haha. You are using it correctly, but I don't think most people will know what you are talking about, so this should make it more clear.

My daily targetgoal is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly targetgoal is to addo a hike to the daily target.

Improving my English level is one of them.

The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to the persons involved.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself sincefor as long as I can remember things.

I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myself in front of can express myself freely. (could also say "and must be open withe people" involvedf you really want to imply that you need to share your feelings, but it might sound a bit more critical of yourself.

-- I didhaven't done well ion this part, but I'm trying to improve.

Feedback

Your grammar is great, I just tried to make it sound more natural. I wish you a swift recovery from COVID, and I hope you make good progress on your goals!

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Tammy

Aug. 1, 2024

3

Thank you so much!

I learned a lot from your corrections and feedback.

Have a nice day!

Living with Purpose

I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really loved it, so I decided to use it as mythe theme for today's titleentry.

The writing prompt is thiwas a follows: Describe your life goals (but do not mention wealth, places you want to go to or the place you live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people).

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and remain healthy.

To be specific: I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelaeaftermath of COVID-19, and themy immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my priore COVID-19 weight.

NOTE: The word "sequelae" is a specialized medical term. Doctors use it, but ordinary people do not.

My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.

The second goal is to keep learning.

Improving my English level is one of themgoal in this regard.

I've been trying to practice my spoken English on Duolingo for half an hour daily and write 4 or 5 entries here every week.

TheMy third onegoals is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to othe persons involvedrs.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think forabout others and ignore myself own feelings since I cwoman aremember things often subservient to men.

I don't want to live abecome vague and grouchy life like my mother.

I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myself in front of the people involved.

-- I didn't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

This entry seems a little long, thenso I'll stop here.

Have a nice day!

Feedback

One more correction:
I didn't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

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Tammy

Aug. 1, 2024

3

Thanks a lot!

I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really love it, so I decided to use it as my today's title.

The writing prompt is this: Describe your life goals, but do not mention wealth, places you want to go tovisit or live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people.

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and stay healthy.

To be sSpecific:ally, I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and m. My weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.

I would like to improvinge my English level is one of them.

TheMy third onegoal is to record and review my feelings and thoughts ando communicate them to the persons involved.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself ever since I can remember things.

I don't want to live a vague and grouchy life like my mother.life that is not what I want.

I believe that I'm the owner of my own life and must clear myselfrake responsibility in front of the people involved.

-- I didon't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

This entry seems a little long, thenso I'll stop here.

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Tammy

July 31, 2024

3

Thank you so much!

Long time no see and have a nice day!

Living with Purpose

I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really love it, so I decided to use it as my today's title.

The writing prompt is this: Describe your life goals but do not mention wealth, places you want to go to or live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people.

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and healthy.

To be specific: I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae oflong COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

"sequelae" is a very formal/technical word, and most people now know the effects and lasting symptoms after COVID as "long Covid"

My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.

The second goal is to keep learning.

Improving my English level is one of them.

I've been trying to practice my spoken English on Duolingo for half an hour daily and write 4 or 5 entries here every week.

The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them towith the personsople that are involved.

"persons involved" sounds a bit unnatural, this is the best alternative I can think of for now

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself since I can remember things.

I don't want to live a vague and grouchy life like my mother.

I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myselfexpress myself clearly in front of the people that are involved.

表明自己 - "make my thoughts/intentions known" or "express myself clearly" might be better; I did not understand what you meant by "clear myself" until I read your Chinese translation of the entry.

-- I didhaven't done well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

This entry seems a little long, then I'll stop here.

Have a nice day!

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

July 31, 2024

3

Thank you so much!

I learned a lot from your corrections and feedback!

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TNewfields

Aug. 1, 2024

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ONE CORRECTION:
X I didn't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.
0 I haven't done well in this regards, but I'm trying to improve.
0 I haven't been so successful so far, but I'm trying to improve.

Well done! May your goals come true.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Aug. 1, 2024

3

Thank you so much! I got it!

Living with Purpose


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I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really love it, so I decided to use it as my today's title.


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I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really love it, so I decided to use it as my today's title.

I just corrected a Chinese entry with this title and really loved it, so I decided to use it as mythe theme for today's titleentry.

The writing prompt is this: Describe your life goals but do not mention wealth, places you want to go to or live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The writing prompt is this: Describe your life goals, but do not mention wealth, places you want to go tovisit or live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people.

The writing prompt is thiwas a follows: Describe your life goals (but do not mention wealth, places you want to go to or the place you live in, your ideal job, or relationships with other people).

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and healthy.


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For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and stay healthy.

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and remain healthy.

For me, the first goal is to keep exercising and stay healthy.

To be specific: I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging.


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To be sSpecific:ally, I want to get healthy through daily exercise routines, such as hiking, yoga, and jogging.

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Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.


Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae oflong COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

"sequelae" is a very formal/technical word, and most people now know the effects and lasting symptoms after COVID as "long Covid"

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelae of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelaeaftermath of COVID-19, and themy immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my priore COVID-19 weight.

NOTE: The word "sequelae" is a specialized medical term. Doctors use it, but ordinary people do not.

Because I'm still struggling with the sequelaelasting effects of COVID-19, and the immediate goal is to get a good night's sleep every day and get back to my prior COVID-19 weight.

Sequelae is a very specific word, I had to look it up haha. You are using it correctly, but I don't think most people will know what you are talking about, so this should make it more clear.

My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.


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My daily target is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and m. My weekly target is to add a hike to the daily target.

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My daily targetgoal is to practice yoga for one hour or jog over 10,000 steps, and my weekly targetgoal is to addo a hike to the daily target.

The second goal is to keep learning.


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Improving my English level is one of them.


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I would like to improvinge my English level is one of them.

Improving my English level is one of themgoal in this regard.

Improving my English level is one of them.

I've been trying to practice my spoken English on Duolingo for half an hour daily and write 4 or 5 entries here every week.


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I've been trying to practice my spoken English on Duolingo for half an hour daily and write 4 or 5 entries here every week.

The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to the persons involved.


The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them towith the personsople that are involved.

"persons involved" sounds a bit unnatural, this is the best alternative I can think of for now

TheMy third onegoal is to record and review my feelings and thoughts ando communicate them to the persons involved.

TheMy third onegoals is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to othe persons involvedrs.

The third one is to record and review my feelings and thoughts and communicate them to the persons involved.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself since I can remember things.


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As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself ever since I can remember things.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think forabout others and ignore myself own feelings since I cwoman aremember things often subservient to men.

As a Chinese woman, I've been told to think for others and ignore myself sincefor as long as I can remember things.

I don't want to live a vague and grouchy life like my mother.


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I don't want to live a vague and grouchy life like my mother.life that is not what I want.

I don't want to live abecome vague and grouchy life like my mother.

I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myself in front of the people involved.


I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myselfexpress myself clearly in front of the people that are involved.

表明自己 - "make my thoughts/intentions known" or "express myself clearly" might be better; I did not understand what you meant by "clear myself" until I read your Chinese translation of the entry.

I believe that I'm the owner of my own life and must clear myselfrake responsibility in front of the people involved.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I believe I'm the owner of my life and must clear myself in front of can express myself freely. (could also say "and must be open withe people" involvedf you really want to imply that you need to share your feelings, but it might sound a bit more critical of yourself.

-- I didn't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.


-- I didhaven't done well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

-- I didon't do well in this part, but I'm trying to improve.

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-- I didhaven't done well ion this part, but I'm trying to improve.

This entry seems a little long, then I'll stop here.


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This entry seems a little long, thenso I'll stop here.

This entry seems a little long, thenso I'll stop here.

Have a nice day!


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