July 13, 2021
Living Off The Grid
Last week I watched three short videos about three married couples living off the grid.
The first couple, who wanted own their house without any debt are amazing. They have produced many vegetables in their gardens by themselves, keeping some chickens for eggs, even having bees to correct honey. A husband sometimes catch fishes in the sea for their meal.
The second one has two daughters, who were born after a couple started this harsh life style. Their house has many rooms even a guest room and a sauna. That area is really cold in the winter, so a husband scooped mud from a pond and used their walls and ceilings to protect bitter cold. They said that their live is highly affordable lifestyle.
The last was a couple who lives a tiny island, where has only their houses. They made five or six their small houses in separately, which took 10years to completed by themselves.
All couples in commons are that they are very handy, good at producing many foods and hard workers. Their everyday lives are taking care of their foods for their meals and fixing their houses to make conformable lives for them.
Living Off The Grid
Last week I watched three short videos about three married couples living off the grid.
The first couple, who wanted own their house without any debt, are amazing.
They have producedgrow many vegetables in their gardens by themselves, keeping some chickens for eggs, and even havingkeep bees to corrllect honey.
AThe husband sometimes catches fishes in the sea for their meal.
The second oncouple has two daughters, who were born after a couplethey started this harsh life style.
Their house has many rooms, even a guest room and a sauna.
Thate area ithey live in gets really cold in the winter, so athe husband scooped mud from a pond and usedto put on their walls and ceilings to protect their house from the bitter cold.
They said that their liey have isan highly affordable lifestyle.
The last was a couple who lives on a tiny island, where has only their hous by themselves.
They made five or sixbuilt their small houses in separatelyby themselves, which took 10 years to completed by themselves.
Not sure what you mean by this sentence.
All these couples in commons are thathave the same things in common: they are very handy, good at producing manydifferent foods, and hard workersing.
Their everyday lives areconsist of taking care of their foods for their meals and fixing their houses to make conformable lives for themthem more comfortable.
July 14, 2021
Thank you so much for your correction. I saw many mistakes. I need to be more careful, Have a nice day!!!
July 14, 2021
You're welcome! Don't worry about it, making mistakes is how you learned. Good luck with your studies.
Living Off The Grid
Last week I watched three short videos about three married couples living off the grid.
The first couple, who wanted to own their house without any debt, are amazing.
Make sure to close the additional information with commas
They have produced many vegetables in their gardens by themselves, keeping some chickens for eggs, and even having bees to corrllect honey.
AThe husband sometimes catches fishes in the sea for their meal.
The second oncouple has two daughters, who were born after athe couple started this harsh life style.
Thate area where they live is really cold in the winter, so athe husband scooped mud from a pond and used it on their walls and ceilings to protect against the bitter cold.
They said that their livfe is highly affordable lifestyle.
The last was a couple who lives on a tiny island, where hasich only has their houses.
I am not sure what you are saying here, but I think you meant that the island only has their house and no other.
They made five or six their small houses in separately, which took 10 years to completed by themselves.
All of the couples had in commons are that they are are very handy, good at producing manyvarious foods, and hard workers.
Their everyday lives areinclude them taking care of their foods for their meals and fixing their houses to make conformable lives for themselves.
July 14, 2021
Thank so much for your correction. Yes, your interpretation was right. What I wanted to say was there was only their house and no other. I don't think I can imitate their life style. Have a lovely day!!
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They have produced many vegetables in their gardens by themselves, keeping some chickens for eggs, even having bees to correct honey. They have produced many vegetables in their gardens by themselves, keeping some chickens for eggs, and even having bees to co They |
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Their house has many rooms even a guest room and a sauna. Their house has many rooms, even a guest room and a sauna. |
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That area is really cold in the winter, so a husband scooped mud from a pond and used their walls and ceilings to protect bitter cold. Th Th |
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The last was a couple who lives a tiny island, where has only their houses. The last was a couple who lives on a tiny island, wh I am not sure what you are saying here, but I think you meant that the island only has their house and no other. The last |
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They made five or six their small houses in separately, which took 10years to completed by themselves. They made five or six They Not sure what you mean by this sentence. |
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