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corina_1995

Feb. 20, 2023

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Living abroad.

To be honest, i've never did a exchance year or something like that. My aunt spend some weeks somewhere in spain to improve her spain skills. After her Trip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learnd in a very short time. And i think i understand the fascination about the trip.

A year abroad or just some weeks abroad has a lot of geat advantages. You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights of the culture and the way people live there. It can be an eye-opening experience, that you will not forget.

What stopped me? Well, on the one hand the high costs and on the other hand my worries. My parents has four children and had not much money.
But i also was afraid about being alone in a new country. I am one of those shy people, so i head thoughts like: am I good enough in english yet? Will i meet some new people?

I was very young and I would do it differently today. :)

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Living aAbroad.

To be honest, iI've never did a exchanceone a study abroad year or someanything like that.

We always capitalize the word "I."

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

And iI think iI understand the fascination aboutwith the trip.

A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights of the culture and the way people live there.

It can be an eye-opening experience, that you will not forget.

What stopped me?

Well, on the one hand, it was the high costs and, on the other hand my, I was worriesd.

My parents hasve four children and had not muchdon't have a lot of money.

But iI also was afraid about being alone in a new country.

I am one of those shy people, so iI head thoughts like this: am I good enough in eEnglish yet?

Will iI meet some new people?

I was very young and I would do it differently today.

:)

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Good for you!

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corina_1995

Feb. 21, 2023

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Thank you!!

To be honest, iI've never didone an exchancge year or something/anything like that.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she (had) learned in a very short time.

Would be more natural to say "...she told us about how friendly her hosts had been..."

And iI think iI understand ther fascination about the trip.

A year abroad or just some weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights of the culture and the way people live there.

It can be an eye-opening experience, that you will not forget.

What stopped me?

My parents hasve four children and had not much money.

But i also was afraid about being alone in a new country.

I am one of those shy people, so iI head thoughts like: am I good enough in englisis my English good enough yet?

Will i meet some new people?

I was very young and I would do it differently today.

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Good work! You just tend to use incorrect tenses (though tenses are admittedly tricky) and you have a few spelling errors. Also just a note: The pronoun "I" and any contractions using "I" like "I've" or "I'd" are always capitalized.

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corina_1995

Feb. 21, 2023

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Thank you! :)

To be honest, iI've never did an exchancge year or something like that.

When using the words “I” “I’m” “I’ve” capitalize the letter I

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

Capitalize names of counties.
Spent is the past tense version of spend

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

And iI think iI understand the fascination about the trip.

A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You can use the phrase “a lot” or if you want to sound more formal you can use “many”

You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights ofn the culture and the way people live there.

My parents hasve four children and hadid not have much money.

But iI also was afraid about being alone in a new country.

I am one of those shy people, so iI head thoughts like: am I good enough in english yet?

Will iI meet some new people?

You can include the word “some” if you want but you don’t have to

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Nice job!

To be honest, i've never didone an exchancge year or someanything like that.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

After her Ttrip, she told us about herow friendly her hosts had been and how much she had learned in a verysuch a short time.

To be honest, iI've never didone an exchancge year or something like that.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

And iI think iI understand ther fascination about the trip.

A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights ofabout the culture and the way people live there.

It can be an eye-opening experience, that you will not forget.

What stopped me?

Well, on the one hand the high costs and on the other hand my worries.

My parents hasve four children and had notdidn't have much money.

But iI was also was afraid about being alone in a new country.

I am one of those shy people, so iI head thoughts like: am I good enough in englisis my English good enough yet?

Will iI meet some new people?

I was very young and I would do it differently today.

:)

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Great job!

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corina_1995

Feb. 20, 2023

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Tanks you so much! :)

Living abroad.


Living aAbroad.

To be honest, i've never did a exchance year or something like that.


To be honest, iI've never didone an exchancge year or something like that.

To be honest, i've never didone an exchancge year or someanything like that.

To be honest, iI've never did an exchancge year or something like that.

When using the words “I” “I’m” “I’ve” capitalize the letter I

To be honest, iI've never didone an exchancge year or something/anything like that.

To be honest, iI've never did a exchanceone a study abroad year or someanything like that.

We always capitalize the word "I."

My aunt spend some weeks somewhere in spain to improve her spain skills.


My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

Capitalize names of counties. Spent is the past tense version of spend

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

My aunt spendt some weeks somewhere in sSpain to improve her sSpainish skills.

After her Trip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learnd in a very short time.


After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

After her Ttrip, she told us about herow friendly her hosts had been and how much she had learned in a verysuch a short time.

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she (had) learned in a very short time.

Would be more natural to say "...she told us about how friendly her hosts had been..."

After her Ttrip, she told us about her friendly hosts and how much she learned in a very short time.

And i think i understand the fascination about the trip.


And iI think iI understand ther fascination about the trip.

And iI think iI understand the fascination about the trip.

And iI think iI understand ther fascination about the trip.

And iI think iI understand the fascination aboutwith the trip.

A year abroad or just some weeks abroad has a lot of geat advantages.


A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You can use the phrase “a lot” or if you want to sound more formal you can use “many”

A year abroad or just some weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

A year abroad or just somea few weeks abroad has a lot of great advantages.

You learn a new language way faster and get authentic insights of the culture and the way people live there.


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It can be an eye-opening experience, that you will not forget.


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My parents has four children and had not much money.


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But i also was afraid about being alone in a new country.


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But iI also was afraid about being alone in a new country.

I am one of those shy people, so i head thoughts like: am I good enough in english yet?


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I am one of those shy people, so iI head thoughts like this: am I good enough in eEnglish yet?

Will i meet some new people?


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I was very young and I would do it differently today.


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