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You’ve used transition words where they aren’t necessary, “but” is used to indicate the next clause goes against the first, not as a connector.

Talking aboutIn terms of quality, recorded music tends to have abe better quality.

If you are introducing an idea, “talking about” is not a usual way to do so.

You do not need to clarify that you are talking about quality, as it is already the subject of the sentence.

Even though, recorded music is compressed electronically, if you use quality listening devices you get a clearest sound than in a live concert with big speakers.

Commas separate clauses

It is not just a quality sound matter, rmatter of sound quality. Recorded songs are made and polished for months, so it is almost impossible to find a mistake with the singer or band mistake oin them.

“Quality” comes before “sound” as its adjective.

A “mistake” is being found, with mistake applying to “the singer or band”.

Besides the quality, recorded music is also more conveniencet thatn live onemusic.

Convenient is the adjective, convenience is the noun.

“One” cannot replace a noun as a direct object.

Nowadays you have several online music streaming websites, where you can find massive number of song s of every genre.

A comma is not needed here

Online streaming music makes it possible to listen to your favourite artists at any time and at any place, otherwise i. It could be really difficult to watch a music celebrity on live if you do not live in a big city.

Separate ideas belong in separate sentences.

So, probably, tThe best option iscould be to combine them, but I am going to expose some of their advantages and disadvantages.

Talking aboutIn relation to quality, recorded music tends to have a better quality.

Even though, recorded music is compressed electronically, if you use quality listening devices you get a clearestr sound than in a live concert with big speakers.

your originally sentence read like this:
- recorded music is compressed electronically if you use quality listening devices

so you have to put the comma like how I editted it in order for it to make sense as:
(1) Even though recorded music is compressed electronically
(2) if you use quality listening devices you get a clearer sound than in a live concert with big speakers.

It is not just a sound quality sound matter, recorded songs are made and polished for months, so it is almost impossible to find any mistakes made by the singer or the band mistake oin them.

in a song

Besides the quality, recorded music is also more conveniencet thatn live onemusic.

convenience is a noun

Nowadays, you have several online music streaming websites, where you can find massive numbera plethora of song s of every genre.

massive number doesn't really sound right here even though it's not grammatically wrong

plethora is a fancy word to use to say a large number

Online streaming music makes it possible to listen to your favourite artists at any time and at any place, otherwise it could be really difficult to watch a music celebrity onfamous (music) artists live if you do not live in a big city.

at any time OR anytime (no "at) (this is more colloquial)

Although it could have more quality and to be more convenient, myI thoughts about it areink that is preferable, always it isif possible, listening to live music because no recorded song is going to ever convey ever the emotion and the sensations of live music.

Live or rRecorded mMusic?

Always capitalize all main words in titles. Small words like and, or, is etc. can be left uncapitalized

So, probably, the best option is probably to combine them, but I am going to exposeshow some of their advantages and disadvantages.

In English, adverbs come after the verb so probably would come after IS since it’s modifying that verb.

Talking about quality, rRecorded music tends to have a better quality.

You don’t really need the first part of the sentence, the second one will convey the same meaning

Even though, recorded music is compressed electronically if youdigitally you can use quality listening devices youto get a clearestr sound than in a live concert with big speakers.

IAlthough it is not just a quality sound that matters, recorded songs are made and polished for months, so. Therefore it is almost impossible to find a singer or band mistake os in them.

Besides the quality, recorded music is also more conveniencet that live one.

Nowadays you have several online music streaming websites, where you can find a massive number of song s ofin every genre.

Online music streaming music makeakes it possible to listen to your favourite artists at anytime and at anyplace, otherwisenywhere. Without it, it cwould be really difficult to watch a music celebrity on live if you do not live in a big city.

Although it could have more quality and to behas a better quality sound and is more convenient, myI thoughts about it areink that it is preferable, always it iswhenever possible, to listening to live music because no recorded song is ever going to convey ever the emotion and the sensations of live music.