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ayumi

March 13, 2021

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Live longer

I’m 41 years old. If my parents were still alive, they would be 70 now. They are both in heaven. I wish I could meet them again. I miss them so much all the time. I want to live longer than my parents and see my daughter grow.


私は41歳、両親が生きていれば今彼らは70歳。でも二人とも天国にいる。もう一度会えたらなぁと思う。いつも恋しくてたまらない。私は両親よりも長く生きて娘が成長していく姿を見たい。

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Live longer

I’m 41 years old.

If my parents were still alive, they would be 70 now.

They are both in heaven.

I wish I could meet them again.

I miss them so much all the time.

I want to live longer than my parents and see my daughter grow.

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花丸です!頑張ってください。I hope you do, too!

Live longer


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I’m 41 years old.


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If my parents were still alive, they would be 70 now.


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They are both in heaven.


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I wish I could meet them again.


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I miss them so much all the time.


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I want to live longer than my parents and see my daughter grow.


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