Feb. 17, 2025
Live in Berlin
I arrived in Berlin last October. I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for me too. In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that language is too complicated. Even i was sometimes angry with myself for that election, to come here.
But after some weeks, I realized that the city is incredible. I love being here. I like the story of Berlin, I like going to museums, going to parties. Also you can find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries. In addition, it's full of parks and lakes. You never get bored!! I decided to continue working in a coffee shop. I wish I could find a professional job.
But not everything is perfect here. For example the weather!! Winter is very cold, always is claudy, the night is too long. And summer is too short!
Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far from my family and friends, I miss them!
Meanwhile, i will enjoy to live in Berlin
Liveing in Berlin
I arrived in Berlin last October.
I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for me tooyself as well.
In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated.
Even i wasI was even sometimes angry with myself for that electdecision, to come here.
But after some weeks, I realized that the city is incredible.
I love being here.
I like the story of Berlin, I like going to museums, going to and parties.
Also yYou can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries.
In addition, it's full of parks and lakes.
You never get bored!!
I decided to continue working in a coffee shop.
I wish I could find a professional job.
But not everything is perfect here.
For example the weather!!
Winter is very cold,; it is always is claoudy, and the night is too long.
And summer is too short!
Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far from my family and friends,. I miss them!
Meanwhile, i will enjoy to liveBut in the meantime, I enjoy living in Berlin
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The grammatical rules behind commas, full stops and semi colons are rather difficult. Try not to use a comma when you should have used a full stop - this mistake is common for native speakers as well as foreign language learners.
Feb. 24, 2025
thank you very much!
Live in Berlin
I arrived in Berlin last October.
I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for me too.
In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated.
without the article 'the' it sounds like you mean language is general is too complicated rather than a specific one.
Even iI was sometimes even angry with myself for that electdecision, to come here.
'election' isn't used like that. That normally referred to voting for politicians.
But after some weeks, I realized that the city is incredible.
I love being here.
I like the story of Berlin, I like going to museums, going to parties.
Also yYou can also find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries.
In addition, it's full of parks and lakes.
You never get bored!!
I decided to continue working in a coffee shop.
But not everything is perfect here.,
Ffor example the weather!!
This felt like one sentance with a comma rather than two sentances.
Winter is very cold, always is claoudy, the night iss are too long.,
Aand summer is too short!
When making a list separated by commas the and always comes before the last thing.
Another thing that is negative about living here, is that I'm so far away from my family and friends, I miss them!
Meanwhile, i will enjoy to liveliving in Berlin
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A lot of that was really clear and understandable. Hope my comments help
Feb. 24, 2025
Thank you for your comments!
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I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for me too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I chose to come here because my boyfriend had found a job, so the plan was to come here with him, and look for a professional job for m |
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In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that language is too complicated. In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated. without the article 'the' it sounds like you mean language is general is too complicated rather than a specific one. In the beginning I was not convinced, because I know that the language is too complicated. |
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Even i was sometimes angry with myself for that election, to come here.
'election' isn't used like that. That normally referred to voting for politicians.
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But after some weeks, I realized that the city is incredible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love being here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like the story of Berlin, I like going to museums, going to parties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I like the story of Berlin, |
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Also you can find restaurants, bars and bakeries from different countries.
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In addition, it's full of parks and lakes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You never get bored!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I decided to continue working in a coffee shop. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example the weather!!
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Winter is very cold, always is claudy, the night is too long. Winter is very cold, always is cl Winter is very cold |
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And summer is too short!
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