Jan. 26, 2025
Little improvements lead to big result
By increasing efficiency of daily habits even by 1% over 1 year you will get 37% of productivity enhancements.
The Brit's cycling team did the same thing in the Tour de France. They got better mattresses to sleep well and replace their bike seats to more confortable ones. After all the little changes they made, they won many medals in their time.
LittleSmall improvements lead to big results
By increasing the efficiency of your daily habits even by 1% (per day?), over 1 year you will get a 37% of productivity enhancementsenhancement in productivity.
It's not clear where 37% comes from here, which might make it clearer if "per day" is the right phrase here.
The Brit'sish cycling team did the same thing in the Tour de France.
"Brit's" is too casual to fit with the tone of the rest of this piece.
They got better mattresses toso they could sleep well and replaced their bike seats towith more conmfortable ones.
After all the little changes they made, they won many medals in their time.
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I think improvement could be made to this sentence but I am not sure - so I will leave it to someone more skilled than myself.
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Overall cool journal! I agree 100% with the sentiment, a little bit everyday is really the secret to success in life.
Jan. 27, 2025
I made a mistake in the first sentence but can't edit it. I should be:
By increasing the efficiency of one's daily habits by even just 1% over a year, you improve productivity by 37%.
Apologies for the mistake!
Little improvements lead to big results
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The Brit'sish cycling team did the same thing in the Tour de France.
They got better mattresses to sleep well, and they replaced their bike seats tofor more conmfortable ones.
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Very good! Do you think this could apply to language-learning? What changes would you make?
Little improvements lead to big results
"to a big result" or "big results", not "to big result"
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They got better mattresses to sleep well and replaced their bike seats towith more conmfortable ones.
After all the little changes they made, they won many medals in their time.
By increasing efficiency of daily habits even by 1%, over 1 year you will get a 37% improvement of productivity enhancementsoverall.
Using exact numbers like 1% and 37% makes this sound objective and measurable, but I feel like the point you're making is more abstract.
The Brit'sish cycling team did the same thing in the Tour de France.
"Brit" I think is slang for "British person", but I don't feel like I'd use it in this context.
They got better mattresses to sleep well and replaced their bike seats to more conmfortable ones.
"Got" decides the tense of this sentence so "replace" needs to be in past tense for consistency.
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After all the little changes they made, they won many medals in their time. After all the little changes they made, they won many medals in their time.
I think improvement could be made to this sentence but I am not sure - so I will leave it to someone more skilled than myself. After all the little changes they made, they won many medals |
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