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dannymleone

July 29, 2020

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Little Foundling Destiny

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc. from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into meaningful sentence/s or a short story.

Random words; FOUNDLING, MAIM

Many years ago having took in a little dirty foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar they didn’t know that many years after he’ll become an Admiral of The First Intergalactic Fleet and the most famous space explorer in the universe and how their own name will resound in the history of humankind.

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Many years ago, having took in a little dirty foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar, they didn’t know that many years lafter he’ll would become an Admiral of The First Intergalactic Fleet and the most famous space explorer in the universe and how their own name will resound in the history of humankind.

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The sentence is quite long. It would be easier to read if you break it up into multiple small sentence.

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Many years ago having took in a little dirty, when they took in a dirty little foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar, they didn’t knowhad no idea that many years lafter he’ll would become an Admiral of Tin the First Intergalactic Fleet and, the most famous space explorer in the universe, and how their ownthat his name willould resound in the history of humankind.

Little Foundling Destiny

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc.

from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into meaningful sentence/s or a short story.

Random words; FOUNDLING, MAIM

Many years ago having took in a little dirty foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar they didn’t know that many years after he’ll become an Admiral of The First Intergalactic Fleet and the most famous space explorer in the universe and how their own name will resound in the history of humankind.

Many years ago having took in a little dirty, when they took in a dirty little foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar, they didn’t knowhad no idea that many years lafter he’ll would become an Admiral of Tin the First Intergalactic Fleet and, the most famous space explorer in the universe, and how their ownthat his name willould resound in the history of humankind.

Many years ago, having took in a little dirty foundling with a roughly maimed soul from the destroyed streets of Nardhazar, they didn’t know that many years lafter he’ll would become an Admiral of The First Intergalactic Fleet and the most famous space explorer in the universe and how their own name will resound in the history of humankind.

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