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Monday: Loves Diary my life is crazy my body is against me. I have pimple everywhere on my body by my arms legs and stomach. Purberty is very difficult and crazy. The school is also not better you know who is monika the evil queen from there class. Because somethings students say i am pretty than she make
my life terrible. her parents belongs the school and they are very rich .Because of this come she with all from that.I am the class with her. But it is not only the school my parents are also so bad . I have also too much money but the terrible parents of the world . my parents argument length of time. My dad works to much and have barely time for me and my mom is a playgirl she likes only partys and drinks . Sometimes she know if i am there and there is also still my chrush the captain there football team ken. He is big helpless and very nice but I am to speak with him wish me luck diary by all the problems I need them

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Monday: LovesDear Diary, my life is crazy m. My body is against me.

I have pimples everywhere on my body by, on my arms, my legs and my stomach.

Purberty is very difficult and crazy.

The school is also not better y. You know who is mMonika, the evil queen from there class.?

It's not clear what you are trying to say here

Because some things students say i am pretty, thaen she makes

my life terrible.

hHer parents belongsown (?) the school and they are very rich .Because of this come she with all from that.I am in the class with her.

Not clear what you are trying to say ihe second sentence

But it is not only the school m. My parents are also so bad .

I have also too much money but theAlthough I have perhaps too much money I also have the most terrible parents ofin the world .

Unsure if I have interpreted correctly what you're saying here

mMy parents argument length of timee a lot.

My dad works too much and have barely has time for me, and my mom is a playgirl s. She likes only partysing and drinks .

He is big, helpless and very nice, but I amhave still (?) to speak with him w. Wish me luck, diary by. With all the problems I need themit!

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A good effort. I hope tomorrow is better for you!

Lisa's Diary

Monday: LovesDear Diary, my life is crazy, my body is againsthates me.

I have pimples everywhere on my body by, my arms, legs, and stomach.

Purberty is very difficult and crazy.

The sSchool is also notisn't going any better, you know who is mMonika, the evil queen from there class.

Because somethings students say iI am prettyier than she she makes

my life terrimiserable.

Ther parents school belongs the schoolo her parents and they are very rich . Because of this come she with all from that.I am the class with hershe is in all my classes.

But it is not only the school, my parents are also so bad .

I have alsoalso have too much money, but the most terrible parents ofin the world .

mMy parents argument length offight all of the time.

My dad works too much and have barely has time for me, and my mom is a playgirl, she only likes only partyies and drinks .

Sometimes she know if is whether I am there, and there is also still my chrush the captaion there football team kcaptain, Ken.

Was meinst du mit „Sometimes she knows whether I am there"? Wie sieht das im Deutschen aus?

He is big, a bit helpless and very nice, but I am to speak with him w. Wish me luck, diary by, with all these problems I need themsome.

Bitte auf Deutsch?

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Da habe ich von dir aber schon besseres Englisch gesehen - was ist passiert?

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Monday: Loves Diary my life is crazy my body is against me.


Monday: LovesDear Diary, my life is crazy, my body is againsthates me.

Monday: LovesDear Diary, my life is crazy m. My body is against me.

I have pimple everywhere on my body by my arms legs and stomach.


I have pimples everywhere on my body by, my arms, legs, and stomach.

I have pimples everywhere on my body by, on my arms, my legs and my stomach.

Purberty is very difficult and crazy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Purberty is very difficult and crazy.

The school is also not better you know who is monika the evil queen from there class.


The sSchool is also notisn't going any better, you know who is mMonika, the evil queen from there class.

The school is also not better y. You know who is mMonika, the evil queen from there class.?

It's not clear what you are trying to say here

Because somethings students say i am pretty than she make


Because somethings students say iI am prettyier than she she makes

Because some things students say i am pretty, thaen she makes

my life terrible.


my life terrimiserable.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

her parents belongs the school and they are very rich .Because of this come she with all from that.I am the class with her.


Ther parents school belongs the schoolo her parents and they are very rich . Because of this come she with all from that.I am the class with hershe is in all my classes.

hHer parents belongsown (?) the school and they are very rich .Because of this come she with all from that.I am in the class with her.

Not clear what you are trying to say ihe second sentence

But it is not only the school my parents are also so bad .


But it is not only the school, my parents are also so bad .

But it is not only the school m. My parents are also so bad .

I have also too much money but the terrible parents of the world .


I have alsoalso have too much money, but the most terrible parents ofin the world .

I have also too much money but theAlthough I have perhaps too much money I also have the most terrible parents ofin the world .

Unsure if I have interpreted correctly what you're saying here

my parents argument length of time.


mMy parents argument length offight all of the time.

mMy parents argument length of timee a lot.

My dad works to much and have barely time for me and my mom is a playgirl she likes only partys and drinks .


My dad works too much and have barely has time for me, and my mom is a playgirl, she only likes only partyies and drinks .

My dad works too much and have barely has time for me, and my mom is a playgirl s. She likes only partysing and drinks .

Sometimes she know if i am there and there is also still my chrush the captain there football team ken.


Sometimes she know if is whether I am there, and there is also still my chrush the captaion there football team kcaptain, Ken.

Was meinst du mit „Sometimes she knows whether I am there"? Wie sieht das im Deutschen aus?

He is big helpless and very nice but I am to speak with him wish me luck diary by all the problems I need them


He is big, a bit helpless and very nice, but I am to speak with him w. Wish me luck, diary by, with all these problems I need themsome.

Bitte auf Deutsch?

He is big, helpless and very nice, but I amhave still (?) to speak with him w. Wish me luck, diary by. With all the problems I need themit!

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