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prisci

Feb. 8, 2022

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lisa

Hello I am Lisa and I am live Italy and fifteen year old. She is born on 25th january 2007 . I have brown hair blue eyes long legs and a little nose . I wear normally skirts shirts jeans socks and hat . My favourites colors are lila pink blue and yellow . I eat on most the from my mother. She and my father have her own pizza resturant.
They took them (Hot Chesse) . It is the popular resturant from Italy.
My mother bake the best pizza in the town and my father make greats meatballs with pasta. In my Free time I go skateboard or in the game hall by the cinema . Than I go of watch movies my favourite movie is (Not cinderella) and there by lemon juice and candy.

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Hello I am Lisa and I am live Italy and I am fifteen year old.

She iI was born on 25th jJanuary 2007 .

I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs, and a little nose .

I wear normally wear skirts shirts jeans socks and a hat .

My favourites colors are lilac, pink, blue, and yellow .

I eat on most the frommostly eat the food my mother cooks.

I am not sure if this is what you meant.

She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

They took them (Hot Chesse) .

I am not sure what you meant by this.

It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

My mother bakes the best pizza in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta.

"great" does not change even when it is describing a plural word.

In my Ffree time I go skateboard or hang out in the game hall by the cinema .

Thaen I go of watch movies m. My favourite movie is (Not cinderella) and thereI buy lemon juice and candy.

lLisa

Hello! I a'm Lisa and I am, I live in Italy, and I am fifteen years old.

"I'm Lisa" sounds more natural than "I am Lisa." You could also say "My name is Lisa," if you want to be more formal.

She iI was born on 25th jJanuary 25th, 2007 .

When you are writing about yourself, use the pronoun "I".

I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs, and a little nose .

Whenever you are listing things in English, put commas between each item. For example: "I like flowers, trees, and animals."

I wear normally wear skirts, shirts, jeans, socks, and hat s.

In English, adverbs generally come before the verb. So in this case, "normally" should come before "wear".

My favourites colors are lilac, pink, blue, and yellow .

U.S. English and U.K. English have different spellings of certain words. If you want to use U.K. English, use "favourite colours." If you want to use U.S. English, use "favorite colors."

I eat on most the get my looks from my mother.

I'm not sure what "eat on most" means here, so I changed the sentence to something completely different.
If you have more questions, leave a comment on this and I will try to help more! :)

She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

They took them ( name of the restaurant is "Hot Chesese) ."

I'm not sure what this sentence means, but if you provide some more information, I will try my best to assist!

It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

My mother bakes the best pizzas in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta pasta with meatballs.

In my Ffree time I go skateboarding, or into the game hall by the cinema .

Thaen I go ofand watch movies m. My favourite movie is ("Not cCinderella)" and there by lemon juice and candy.

When you are quoting the name of something, use quotation marks "", not parentheses (). For example, I like the movie "Encanto."

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Well done! Good luck in your studying!

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kay_tanadhari

Feb. 8, 2022

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Thaen I go ofand watch movies m. My favourite movie is ("Not cCinderella)" and there by lemon juice and candy.

Also, this sentence should use "buy", not "by".

lLisa

Hello! I am Lisa and I am, I live in Italy and am fifteen years old.

or 'I'm Lisa'

She iI was born on the 25th jJanuary 2007 .

or 'My birthday is the 25th January 2007.'

I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs and a little nose .

I wear normally wear skirts, shirts, jeans, socks and a hat .

My favourites colours are lila, pink, blue and yellow .

colour = UK
color = US

I eat on most the from my motherMy mother cooks me a lot of food.

She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

They took them (Hot Chesse) .

Not sure what this means! Hot Cheese is a type of pizza though i think.

They took over the restaurant called 'Hot Cheese'.

It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

My mother bakes the best pizza in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta.

Sounds tasty!

In my Ffree time I like to go skateboarding or ingo to the game hall by the cinema .

Than I go ofI go there to watch movies m. My favourite movie is (Non't cCinderella), and thereI buy lemon juice and candy.

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Well done :)

lisa


lLisa

lLisa

Hello I am Lisa and I am live Italy and fifteen year old.


Hello! I am Lisa and I am, I live in Italy and am fifteen years old.

or 'I'm Lisa'

Hello! I a'm Lisa and I am, I live in Italy, and I am fifteen years old.

"I'm Lisa" sounds more natural than "I am Lisa." You could also say "My name is Lisa," if you want to be more formal.

Hello I am Lisa and I am live Italy and I am fifteen year old.

She is born on 25th january 2007 .


She iI was born on the 25th jJanuary 2007 .

or 'My birthday is the 25th January 2007.'

She iI was born on 25th jJanuary 25th, 2007 .

When you are writing about yourself, use the pronoun "I".

She iI was born on 25th jJanuary 2007 .

I have brown hair blue eyes long legs and a little nose .


I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs and a little nose .

I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs, and a little nose .

Whenever you are listing things in English, put commas between each item. For example: "I like flowers, trees, and animals."

I have brown hair, blue eyes, long legs, and a little nose .

I wear normally skirts shirts jeans socks and hat .


I wear normally wear skirts, shirts, jeans, socks and a hat .

I wear normally wear skirts, shirts, jeans, socks, and hat s.

In English, adverbs generally come before the verb. So in this case, "normally" should come before "wear".

I wear normally wear skirts shirts jeans socks and a hat .

My favourites colors are lila pink blue and yellow .


My favourites colours are lila, pink, blue and yellow .

colour = UK color = US

My favourites colors are lilac, pink, blue, and yellow .

U.S. English and U.K. English have different spellings of certain words. If you want to use U.K. English, use "favourite colours." If you want to use U.S. English, use "favorite colors."

My favourites colors are lilac, pink, blue, and yellow .

I eat on most the from my mother.


I eat on most the from my motherMy mother cooks me a lot of food.

I eat on most the get my looks from my mother.

I'm not sure what "eat on most" means here, so I changed the sentence to something completely different. If you have more questions, leave a comment on this and I will try to help more! :)

I eat on most the frommostly eat the food my mother cooks.

I am not sure if this is what you meant.

She and my father have her own pizza resturant.


She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

She and my father have their own pizza restaurant.

They took them (Hot Chesse) .


They took them (Hot Chesse) .

Not sure what this means! Hot Cheese is a type of pizza though i think. They took over the restaurant called 'Hot Cheese'.

They took them ( name of the restaurant is "Hot Chesese) ."

I'm not sure what this sentence means, but if you provide some more information, I will try my best to assist!

They took them (Hot Chesse) .

I am not sure what you meant by this.

It is the popular resturant from Italy.


It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

It is thea popular restaurant fromin Italy.

My mother bake the best pizza in the town and my father make greats meatballs with pasta.


My mother bakes the best pizza in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta.

Sounds tasty!

My mother bakes the best pizzas in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta pasta with meatballs.

My mother bakes the best pizza in the town and my father makes greats meatballs with pasta.

"great" does not change even when it is describing a plural word.

In my Free time I go skateboard or in the game hall by the cinema .


In my Ffree time I like to go skateboarding or ingo to the game hall by the cinema .

In my Ffree time I go skateboarding, or into the game hall by the cinema .

In my Ffree time I go skateboard or hang out in the game hall by the cinema .

Than I go of watch movies my favourite movie is (Not cinderella) and there by lemon juice and candy.


Than I go ofI go there to watch movies m. My favourite movie is (Non't cCinderella), and thereI buy lemon juice and candy.

Thaen I go ofand watch movies m. My favourite movie is ("Not cCinderella)" and there by lemon juice and candy.

When you are quoting the name of something, use quotation marks "", not parentheses (). For example, I like the movie "Encanto."

Thaen I go of watch movies m. My favourite movie is (Not cinderella) and thereI buy lemon juice and candy.

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