Jan. 14, 2023
Lately politicians are arguing about the necessity to limit tourist quantity in the cities in someway. I support the limitation of tourism for several reasons:
Firstly, massive tourism have enormous affectation in the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside local people ones.
As a result, housing market exclusively offer small houses for seasonal stay with very high prices. By the same token small local shops with daily basis goods are replaced for restaurants and night clubs and bars.
Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, standing out the ones related with noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends.
In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists; taking some measures to prevent massive tourism.
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Good work.
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Firstly, massive tourism haves an enormous aeffectation i on the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside those of local people ones.
As a result, the housing market exclusively offers small houses for seasonal stays with very high prices.
By the same token small local shops with daily basis goods are replaced forwith restaurants and, night clubs and bars.
Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, standing out theespecially ones related withto noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends.
In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists; by taking some measures to prevent massive tourism.
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nicely written!
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