March 2, 2021
Limited Express Train Would Help Infection
Most people are supposed to go to their office even during the COVID-19 pandemic. It is ridiculous that the government won't restrict the commuting hour, but the opening hour of restaurants. Although the railway companies must realize that crowded trains cause the spread of COVID-19, limited express train have prevented us from going back home comfortably and safely. We could find few people on the cars even in rush hours since buying an express ticket is troublesome and costs a lot. Consequently, the subsequent trains are prone to be crowded.
Limited Express Train Would Helps Help Spread Infection
"Would" means that the trains are currently not spreading infection, but if you implemented them, then they might. Because these trains are reality, and already exist, "would" is not necessary.
Most people are supposed to go to their office even during the COVID-19 pandemic.
It is ridiculous that the government won't restrict the commutinge hours, but will restrict the opening hours of restaurants.
Although the railway companies must realize that crowded trains cause the spread of COVID-19, limited express trains have prevented us from going back home comfortably and safely.
We couldEven during rush hours, we find very few people oin those cars even in rush hours, since buying an express ticket is troublesome and costs a lot.
Consequently, the subsequent trains are prone to be crowded.
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Guess companies want to make money, even if it damages the public health. Good piece of writing though!
March 4, 2021
Thank you for your correction. I agree with your comment.
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Limited Express Train Would Help Infection Limited Express Train "Would" means that the trains are currently not spreading infection, but if you implemented them, then they might. Because these trains are reality, and already exist, "would" is not necessary. |
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Most people are supposed to go to their office even during the COVID-19 pandemic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is ridiculous that the government won't restrict the commuting hour, but the opening hour of restaurants. It is ridiculous that the government won't restrict |
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Although the railway companies must realize that crowded trains cause the spread of COVID-19, limited express train have prevented us from going back home comfortably and safely. Although the railway companies must realize that crowded trains cause the spread of COVID-19, limited express trains have prevented us from going back home comfortably and safely. |
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We could find few people on the cars even in rush hours since buying an express ticket is troublesome and costs a lot.
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Consequently, the subsequent trains are prone to be crowded. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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