Feb. 4, 2021
Lim Kim
Lim Kim (Kim Ye Rim) has shared a picture of herself showing off her charms.
The 27-year-old female singer shared a picture of herself standing tall while dressed in black on her Instagram account yesterday.
Lim Kim’s fans showed positive responses with comments saying, “Simply lovely” and “Wanted to say, Love u Queen!”
Debuting as a member of Two Months in 2012, Kim Ye Rim changed her name to Lim Kim in 2019 and forged her own path as an experimental pop artist. Accordingly, she achieved a feat in winning the Best Dance & Electronic Song and Album awards in the 2020 Korean Music Awards.
Lim Kim
Lim Kim (Kim Ye Rim) has shared a picture of herself showing off her charmsbeauty.
Allure could also work in place of beauty.
The 27-year-old female singer shared a picture of herself standing tall while dressed in black on her Instagram account yesterdayon her Instagram account yesterday. She was standing tall, dressed in black .
Lim Kim’s fans showed a positive responses with comments saying, “Simply lovely” and “Wanted to say, Love u Queen!”
This is a tricky one regarding grammar. Your subject is the fans, which is a singular collective so their response would also be a collective singular even when it might not be unanimous. Note that is based on American English rules and may be different for British English.
Debuting as a member of Two Months in 2012, Kim Ye Rim changed her name to Lim Kim in 2019 and forged her own path as an experimental pop artist.
Accordingly, she achieved a tremendous feat in winning the Best Dance & Electronic Song and Album awards in the 2020 Korean Music Awards.
I don't think I've ever heard/read feat without an adjective preceding it so I added an adjective there.
Feb. 12, 2021
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it :)
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Lim Kim (Kim Ye Rim) has shared a picture of herself showing off her charms. Lim Kim (Kim Ye Rim) has shared a picture of herself showing off her Allure could also work in place of beauty. |
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The 27-year-old female singer shared a picture of herself standing tall while dressed in black on her Instagram account yesterday. The 27-year-old female singer shared a picture of herself |
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Lim Kim’s fans showed positive responses with comments saying, “Simply lovely” and “Wanted to say, Love u Queen!” Lim Kim’s fans showed a positive response This is a tricky one regarding grammar. Your subject is the fans, which is a singular collective so their response would also be a collective singular even when it might not be unanimous. Note that is based on American English rules and may be different for British English. |
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Debuting as a member of Two Months in 2012, Kim Ye Rim changed her name to Lim Kim in 2019 and forged her own path as an experimental pop artist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Accordingly, she achieved a feat in winning the Best Dance & Electronic Song and Album awards in the 2020 Korean Music Awards. Accordingly, she achieved a tremendous feat in winning the Best Dance & Electronic Song and Album awards in the 2020 Korean Music Awards. I don't think I've ever heard/read feat without an adjective preceding it so I added an adjective there. |
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