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b230tri

March 25, 2022

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Like Joker said

The world is a series of irrational and bad luck.
Nothing goes my way.
That's the reason for my depression
Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, everything is easy for him?"
You should think about how to accept the fact that nothing is easy for me.


I'm not serious, it's for learning. peace.

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Like the Joker said

I think the character name is The Joker so it would make more sense to include "the" :)

The world is a series of irrationalities and bad luck.

Nothing goes my way.

That's the reason for my depression.

Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, while everything is easy for him?"

You could also use "but" :D

"

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So good! <33

Like Joker said,

The world is a series of irrationalities and bad luck.

Nothing goes my way.

That's the reason for my depression

Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, but everything is easy for him?

"

You should think about how to accept the fact that nothing is easy for me.

Feedback

I have felt this way too. I recommend talking with others about it if you can, it can be helpful :). Many people don't want to talk about it, but it is worth looking for those who do. Nice job on your writing!

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b230tri

March 25, 2022

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Thanks. I think it is cold fact that you have to accept. Right? If you accept it, you can have peace of mind. Thank you for your correcting and advice.

Like Joker said


Like Joker said,

Like the Joker said

I think the character name is The Joker so it would make more sense to include "the" :)

The world is a series of irrational and bad luck.


The world is a series of irrationalities and bad luck.

The world is a series of irrationalities and bad luck.

Nothing goes my way.


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That's the reason for my depression


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's the reason for my depression.

Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, everything is easy for him?


Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, but everything is easy for him?

Like Joker said, "How come nothing is easy for me, while everything is easy for him?"

You could also use "but" :D

"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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You should think about how to accept the fact that nothing is easy for me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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