Oct. 12, 2021
There are five boys who are always complained absent the cleaning. I have caught for a few times, so the school leaders did. I had told them that if they behaved like these again, I would asked their parents to come school to help them with their cleaning. Obviously, nobody cared. Because I caught them today the countless time.
I notified all of their parents. As I predicted, all the parents didn't take it seriously. One of the boy's mother told me that she had asked her son about it, and her son told her that he always couldn't get up early. She asked me whether I can ask someone to wake her son up in the morning. I told her that his roommates had told me that they tried but failed, and I told her that she could buy him a clock. To be honest, I think it is really ridiculous of the mother to say that. Nobody has any responsibility to wake her son up, escepicially her son doesn't get along well with most of the other boy students. Why others can obey the rules but her son can't? She never though that it is her responsibility to teach her son to behave well in school. And what's more rediculous, she asked her husband to talk with me after she couldn't persuade me that it was my fault result in her son's bad behaviour.
Without doubt, her husband though as she did. I aksed him that if his son absent again, what the punishment would be. He talked a lot but never answerd. I kept asking that, and told him that he was unconfident to make sure his son would behave well. Finally, he said I should punish his son for a week's cleaning alone. I had recorded this.
He even asked my age, I told him that my age wouldn't influence my ability to be a teacher. He kept asking, and I told him that I preferred to keep it a secrete. He also try to talked his stuff to improve his statement. However, all progress were under my control. I would never lose a campaign to someone like him. Because I have practiced much. So in his second call, he became softer. I thought the reason was he couldn't find evidence to improve I was wrong after he called his son.
I always told my students, don't be silly to try to use their parents' force to battle me, I'm not afraid of any parents if they are rude. When I told them I would notify their parents, tried to behave better, because I would really do it as I said. What they did would humiliate their parents, which as the idiom "自取其辱".
It seemed like some of them still couldn't understand what dignity is, maybe the reason is they have never got it in their lives.
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Nice! I'm glad you're feeling confident.
Like Father, Like Son
There are five boys who are always complained absent theing, and refuse to cleaning.
If you wanted to say this in the past tense: There were five boys who always complained and refused to clean.
From the context, it seems like they have improved their behavior, so we should turn this sentence into past tense.
I have caught forthem a few times, soand so did the school leaders did.
I had told them that if they behaved like theseis again, then I would asked their parents to come to school to, and help them with their cleaning.
Obviously, nobody cared.
Alt: Obviously no one cared.
Because I caught them today for the countless time.
You can even combine the previous sentence with this one. For example:
Obviously no one cared, because I caught them for the countless time.
You could also say it this way:
Obviously no one cared, because I have caught them for the umpteenth time.
https://www.wordreference.com/enzh/for%20the%20umpteenth%20time
I notified all of their parents.
As I predicted, all of the parents didn't take it seriously.
One of the boy's mother told me that she had asked her son about it, and her son told her that he always couldn't get up early.
She asked me whether I canould ask someone else to wake her son up in the morning.
I told her that his roommates had told me that they tried, but failed, and I told her that she could buy him a clock.
To be honest, I think it is really ridiculous of the mother to say that.
Nobody has any responsibility to wake her son up, escepipecially if her son doesn't get along well with most of the other boymale students.
Male sounds better here
Why can others can obey the rules, but her son can't?
Alt: Why can others follow the rules, but her son can't?
She never though that it is her responsibility to teach her son to behave well in school.
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Without a doubt, her husband thoughdid as she dsaid.
If you wanted to say they thought of the same thing:
Without a doubt, her husband thought the same as she did.
I aksked him that if his son absent again, what the punishment wshould be if he is absent again.
He talked a lot but never answered.
Alt: He rambled a lot, but never answered my question.
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Finally, he said that I should punish his son for a week'sm by making him cleaning alone for a week.
I had recorded this.
He even asked me for my age, and I told him that my age wouldn't influence my ability to be a teacher.
He kept asking, and I told him that I preferred to keep it a secrete.
You are using the wrong secrete. It should be secret.
Secrete - 分泌 (https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english-chinese-simplified/secrete)
He also try to talked his stuffied a lot of things to improve his statement.
However, all the progress wereas under my control.
Alt: However, I had all of the control. I had control of the entire situation.
I would never lose a campaign to someone like him.
Because I have practiced much.
Combine this sentence with the previous one!
So in his second call, he became softer.
I thought the reason was that he couldn't find evidence to improveshow I was wrong after he called his son.
I always told my students, don' to not be silly toand try to use their parents' force to battle me, because I'm not afraid of any parents even if they are rude.
When I told them that I would notify their parents, they tried to behave better, because I would really do it as I said.
What they did would humiliate their parents, which as the idiom "自取其辱".
It's better if you also included an English translation of the Chinese idiom: "bring disgrace on one's own head"
It seemed like some of them still couldn't understand what dignity is, maybe the reason is they have never got it in their lives.
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Great job and thanks for sharing! I had fun reading this :)
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