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kiwy

Sept. 11, 2021

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Yesterday was Teachers' Day, so several parents of my students' posed greetings in the parents' Wechat group. I told them that I appriciated their blessing, but the group's rules inclued No Chatting. However, a few minutes later, there were still similar massage appeared. What's worse, someone's grandpa sent a video. I was so angry that I reiterated No Chatting. For example, every student who chats in the class also thinks that they will finish talking quickly, but erveryone does it at the same time, the class will be interrupted severely.
To be honest, I wanted to blame them that they shouldn't just accuse their children of bad behaviour in the class. What they need to do was introspecting themselves, because they behaved badly first, their children were just imitating what they did. But I couldn't talk like that because I need to be polite. I am not the teacher of them but their children.
I hate the people who would never introspect themselves and just blame others easily.

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Like Father, Like Son

Yesterday was Teachers' Day, so several parents of my students' posted greetings in the parents' Wechat group.

I told them that, while I apprieciated their blessings, but the group's rules included N"no Cchatting".

However, a few minutes later, there were still similar maessages appeareding.

What's worse, someone's grandpa sent a video.

I was so angry that I reiterated N, no Cchatting allowed.

For example, I wrote, every student who chats in the class also thinks that they will finish talking quickly, but, if erveryone does it at the same time, the class will be interrupted severely.

To be honest, I wanted to blame them thatfor their children's bad behaviour, they shouldn't just accuse their children of bad behaviour in the class.

What they need to do was introspecting themselves, becauseed was some introspection: they behaved badly first,, of course their children were justgoing to imitatinge what they did.

ButHowever, I couldn't talk like that, because I need to be polite.

I am not their teacher of them, but their children's.

I hate the people who would never introspect themselvenever look inwards and just blame others easilyinstead.

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Nice writing! Sorry about the chat.

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kiwy

Sept. 12, 2021

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It is OK, they stopped after my reiteration.

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Yesterday was Teachers' Day, so several parents of my students' posed greetings in the parents' Wechat group.


Yesterday was Teachers' Day, so several parents of my students' posted greetings in the parents' Wechat group.

I told them that I appriciated their blessing, but the group's rules inclued No Chatting.


I told them that, while I apprieciated their blessings, but the group's rules included N"no Cchatting".

However, a few minutes later, there were still similar massage appeared.


However, a few minutes later, there were still similar maessages appeareding.

What's worse, someone's grandpa sent a video.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was so angry that I reiterated No Chatting.


I was so angry that I reiterated N, no Cchatting allowed.

For example, every student who chats in the class also thinks that they will finish talking quickly, but erveryone does it at the same time, the class will be interrupted severely.


For example, I wrote, every student who chats in the class also thinks that they will finish talking quickly, but, if erveryone does it at the same time, the class will be interrupted severely.

To be honest, I wanted to blame them that they shouldn't just accuse their children of bad behaviour in the class.


To be honest, I wanted to blame them thatfor their children's bad behaviour, they shouldn't just accuse their children of bad behaviour in the class.

What they need to do was introspecting themselves, because they behaved badly first, their children were just imitating what they did.


What they need to do was introspecting themselves, becauseed was some introspection: they behaved badly first,, of course their children were justgoing to imitatinge what they did.

But I couldn't talk like that because I need to be polite.


ButHowever, I couldn't talk like that, because I need to be polite.

I am not the teacher of them but their children.


I am not their teacher of them, but their children's.

I hate the people who would never introspect themselves and just blame others easily.


I hate the people who would never introspect themselvenever look inwards and just blame others easilyinstead.

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