Aug. 24, 2024
Life without TV
I threw away my TV set because I hate watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows boring.
It's been a while since I didn't watch TV.
I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrong.
I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.
Recently, I found that I felt smarter when reading on paper sheets than reading on my phone.
I always watch anything absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clear.
Does this happen to only me?
テレビなしの生活
嫌いなタレントを見るのがイヤで、また番組がつまらないと感じたのでテレビを捨てました。
テレビを見なくなってしばらく経った。
Youtubeに依存し過ぎて視力がかなり落ちた。
スマホに触る時間を減らすためにビジネス誌を買うことにしている。
最近、気付いたのだが、スマホで読むよりも紙で読んだ方が頭が良くなる気がする。
スマホではいつもボケッとしながら視聴するが、紙媒体で読むと頭が冴える感じがする。
こう感じるのは私だけかしら？
Life without TV
I threw away my TV set because I hatedon't want to watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows were boring.
It's been a while since I didn'tstopped watching TV.
I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrongbad.
I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.
Recently, I found that I felt smarter when reading on paper sheetsrather than reading on my phone.
I always watch aneverything absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel that my brain is clear.
Does this happen to only me?
Aug. 25, 2024
Thank you so much for correcting!
I threw away my TV set because I hate watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows were boring.
It's been a while since I didn'tstopped watching TV.
I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrongeak.
"weak" or "bad."
I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touchspend on my phone.
Recently, I found that I feelt smarter when reading on paper sheets than reading on my phone.
You could also say "reading printed materials than reading on my phone."
I always watch anything absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clearer.
It may sound more natural to say "I feel my brain is more focused."
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Great job! And I think you are right -- reading paper materials does feel better. I still do watch TV, though :)
Aug. 25, 2024
Thank you so much for correcting!
If I live in a foreign country, I will get stuck with TV shows there :D
LifeALSO POSSIBLE: Living without TV
I threw away my TV set because I hate watching banal TV stars I don't like, and because I fel and most TV shows are boring.
It's been a while since I didn't watching TV.
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I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I touch my phone.
Recently, I found that I felt smarMORE NATURALLY: Recently, my brain seems to work better when reading on paper sheets than reading on my phone.
I always watch anytend to read things absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clear it is easier to concentrate.
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I avoid extended reading on my cellphone, but on my bigger Kindle ebook reading is easy.
Aug. 24, 2024
Thank you so much for correcting!
I think those who keep the time like you are okay to read ebooks.
I continue endlessly...
Life without TV
I threw away my TV set because I hate watching TV stars I don't like, and because I felt TV shows were boring.
More natural.
It's been a while since I didn'tstopped watching TV.
I was so addicted to Youtube on my phone that my eye sight became pretty wrongeak.
I intend to buy business magazines to cut down the hours I {spend touching my phone | spend on my phone}.
Recently, I found that I felt smarter when reading on paper sheets than readingthan on my phone.
It’s more natural without “sheets” and without repeating “reading,” but your original isn’t wrong.
I always read and watch anythings absent-mindedly on my phone, but when reading on paper sheets, I feel my brain is clear.
Does this happen to only me?
Aug. 24, 2024
Thank you so much for correcting!
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