Life meaningMeaning of life

The most important goals of in life, Iin my perspective, should be the connection ofng with family members and friends who we love.

Like the other correction mentioned, "perspective" is used here to mean that it's your opinion.
I removed the "s" from "goals" because you're only listing one goal.
"connecting" instead of "the connection" sounds more natural.

I'd like to spentd more time with them.

Simple grammatical mistake, no big deal.

Life has no meaning, so all of the meanings are what we create, and fromit's up to us to create meaning. From when we are borned until we die, nothing belongs to us.

"(it's) up to us", which can also be "up to you" or "up to me", is an idiomatic phrase meaning it's our decision or our responsibility.
I made these two separate sentences to sound more natural. In school, native English speakers are often warned not to create "run-on sentences" like this!

So basically, the most important meanthing ofin life is just thwhat we feeling within us.

Your original sentence is understandable, but unnatural. This is my suggestion for a more natural way to say it, but it isn't the only way you could say it.

But there are some differences between individuals,. Some people hope to buy something expensive to show off and satisfy ¶
themselves.

These are really good sentences!

I realized I can still get more happiness times tobe happier by meeting my inneremotional needs.

This correction is my suggestion for a more natural way to say this. The most important thing to note is that the phrase is not "happiness times" but "happy times".

I am thirstyeager to get connected with somthe people whomthat I love, ¶
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. Of course there are many ways to get good feeling byfind happiness with money, Bbut I'm afaraid that we can not buy sincereity from anyone.

We don't use "thirsty" like this in English, but I understood what you meant. My suggestion here is a word like "eager" or "keen", meaning that connecting with the people that you love is something you are enthusiastic about and really want to do.

"Whom" was not incorrect, but I turned it into "that" because "whom" feels too formal for this post. "Whom" is a word most English speakers associate with academic or formal writing. For example, we most often see it used in business emails and letters as in the phrase "to whom it may concern".

I really like your use of the idiomatic phrase "I'm afraid" here! It works well. It sounds more natural by removing the "that". Lastly, "sincere" is an adjective and "sincerity" is the noun form of it. The sentence you wrote requires a noun.

So, money is not a top goal, which isbut just a tool, a way to let us get something,.

You could also make these two separate sentences: "So, money is not a top goal. It's just a tool, a way to let us get something."

The most important goals of life, Ilife goals, in my perspective, shouldis define bey the connection tof family members and friends who we love.

Spective is being a spectator => "perspective" is being from your personal point of view/ opinion


"connection of family members and friends who we love" doesn't translate well, but "is define by" helps understand why this goal is important

I'd like spent morea lot time with them.

More => a lot because you spend A LOT of time with them you can share A LOT of days together etc.

Life has no meaning, so all of the meanings are what we create, and from we are borned until we die, nothing belongs to us.

I don't understand this sentence too well.

So basically, the most important meaning of life is just the feelings we share within us.

But there are some differences between individuals, Ssome people hope to buy something expensive to show off and that satisfy ¶
themselves.

I realized I can still get more happinesser times to meeting my inner needs.

happiness => happier describing the time & feelings

I am thirsty to get connected with some people whom I love, ¶
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O of course there are many ways to get a good feeling by money, But I'm afaraid that we can not buy sincerehappiness from anyone.

"You can not buy happiness" is a well known English phrase to describe how money can't give you longtime joy.

So money is not a top goal, which is just a tool, a way to let us get something,.