Jan. 12, 2024
Yesterday evening, I watched a television show called 1818GoldenEyes. I saw larger and larger gap between the rich and poor. In this show, a young lady who might be an affluent second generation, spend over millions half a year in Hermas store, just because she wanted a certain handbag. She even costed nearly twenty thousand Yuan to buy a kennel for her dog!
On the contrary, another lady argued with the online store manager for the cloth that she bought, which was not exceeding two hundred, was too expensive in her opinion that she wanted to return.
I also saw that migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford the food! But they have been working hard over thirty years and haven’t waste half Yuan.
The fortune distribution method isn’t affair, government must take some methods to change it. At least, society should reward the hardworking people, or young ones will “Tangping”, which means do nothing for a living and just keep alive with the lowest cost standard.
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Your sentence was grammatically correct, but there's a famous quote from a movie Forrest Gump which is "Life is like a box of chocolates". I assumed that was what you intended.
Yesterday eveningLast night, I watched a television show called 1818GoldenEyes.
I saw a larger and larger gap between the rich and poor.
In this show, a young lady who might be an affluent second generation, spend over member of an affluent family, spent millions in just half a year in Hermaes store, just because she wanted a certain handbag.
She even costedspent nearly twenty thousand Yuan to buy a kennel for her dog!
On the contrary, another lady argued with the online store manager forthat the cloth thates she bought, which was not exceedingless than two hundred Yuan, was too expensive in her opinion thatand she wanted to return. them.
I also saw that migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford the food!
But they have been working hard overfor more than thirty years and haven’t wasted half a Yuan.
The fortunewealth distribution method isn’t affair,; government must take some methods to change it.
At least, society should reward the hardworking people, or else young ones will “Tangping”, which means to do nothing for a living and just keep alive with the lowest cost standardspending possible.
Life is like a chocolate box.
Yesterday evening, I watched a television show called "1818 Golden Eyes".
I saw the larger and larger gap between the rich and the poor.
Better "It showed the larger and larger gap between the rich and the poor."
In this show, a young lady, who might behave been an affluent second generation (?), spendt over millions in half a year in Hermasat a (Hermes/Hermès) store, just because she wanted a certain handbag.
You need to specify what kind of second generation. Upper class person? Middle class? Child of a businessman?
She even costepaid nearly twenty thousand Yyuan to buy a kennel for her dog!
On the contrary, another lady argued with the manager of an online store manager for the cloth that she bought, which wasdid not exceeding two hundred, yuan. She said it was too expensive in her opinion that she wanted (a return / to return it).
I also saw that (many) migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford the food!
But they have been working hard for over thirty years and haven’t wasted even half Ya yuan.
The fortusystem of money distribution method isn’t affair, and the government must take some methodsteps to change it.
At the very least, society should reward the hardworking people, or young ones will “Tangping”, (which means doing nothing for a living and just keepstaying alive withhile living at the lowest cost standard.)
Recently, Tangping has been translated into English as "lying down flat".
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Yesterday evening, I watched a television show called 1818GoldenEyes. Yesterday evening, I watched a television show called "1818 Golden Eyes".
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I saw larger and larger gap between the rich and poor. I saw the larger and larger gap between the rich and the poor. Better "It showed the larger and larger gap between the rich and the poor." I saw a larger and larger gap between the rich and poor. |
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She even costed nearly twenty thousand Yuan to buy a kennel for her dog! She even She even |
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I also saw that migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford the food! I also saw that (many) migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford I also saw that migrant workers lost their jobs and even can’t afford |
The fortune distribution method isn’t affair, government must take some methods to change it. The The |
At least, society should reward the hardworking people, or young ones will “Tangping”, which means do nothing for a living and just keep alive with the lowest cost standard. At the very least, society should reward Recently, Tangping has been translated into English as "lying down flat". At least, society should reward the hardworking people, or else young ones will “Tangping”, which means to do nothing for a living and just keep alive with the lowest |
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