Jan. 19, 2020
Life is...
This morning, I saw a small beautiful rainbow in the sky.
My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes.
Something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening.
I thought that rainbow made a miracle.
“There’s many ups and downs in our lives.”
I think it’s so true.
I will accept everything and move forward.
今朝、空に小さく美しい虹を見ました。虹はほんの数分で消えたので、私の夫と息子、母、私が見られたのは本当にラッキーでした。
夕方、信じられないほど感動することがありました。
虹が奇跡を起こしたのだと思いました。
「人生には山も谷もある」
本当にそうだと思います。
私は全てを受け入れ、前に進んでいこうと思います。
Life is...
This morning, I saw a small and beautiful rainbow in the sky.
My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes.
SAfter seeing it, something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening.
"After seeing it, something unbelievable happened that moved me deeply this evening."
Both my correction and comment should be okay to use. I put "After seeing it" since this makes it more obvious that you think the rainbow had something to do with the miracle.
I thought that the rainbow made athis miracle happen.
"It felt like the rainbow made this miracle happen."
*I’m not too sure about this. Hopefully someone corrects me if I’m wrong.
“There’s are many ups and downs in our lives.”
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I think it’s sothis is very true.
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I will accept everything and movekeep moving forward.
Jan. 19, 2020
This is a good mindset to have ^^
Jan. 20, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
My days are mixed by tough things and happy things. That’s life!
Jan. 20, 2020
“There’s are many ups and downs in our lives.”
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I think it’s sothis is very true.
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I will accept everything and movekeep moving forward.
Could I ask you more about this in detail?
Honestly, I’m not feeling that I’m moving on now.
Physically and mentally, I do take a rest now, so I wrote “ (I will) move forward.”
In this case, is it more natural to write “ (I will) move forward from now on” instead of that?🤔
Jan. 20, 2020
That sounds fine! Sorry, I’m sorry for assuming you felt differently.
Jan. 21, 2020
Thank you so much, Sambal!🙏🏻✨
Don’t apologize, you don’t have to do that.
I really appreciate your effort. 😊
ありがとうございます✨
My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes.
Something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening.
I thought that rainbow made a miracle.
“There’s many ups and downs in our lives.” I think it’s so true. I will accept everything and move forward.
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This morning, I saw a small beautiful rainbow in the sky. This morning, I saw a small and beautiful rainbow in the sky. |
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My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"After seeing it, something unbelievable happened that moved me deeply this evening." Both my correction and comment should be okay to use. I put "After seeing it" since this makes it more obvious that you think the rainbow had something to do with the miracle. |
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I thought that rainbow made a miracle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I thought that the rainbow made "It felt like the rainbow made this miracle happen." *I’m not too sure about this. Hopefully someone corrects me if I’m wrong. |
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“There’s many ups and downs in our lives.” I think it’s so true. I will accept everything and move forward. This sentence has been marked as perfect! “There |
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