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"I have .." is present tense so it means you still feel shame now.

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oOne day in the morning at about 10 o'clock in the morning, my boss received a phone call from Director Chen, and then he asked me to go with him to see the powerful man.

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hHe was thin and about 1.75m in height, thin with grey hair, and some black skin, and. He was wearing leisure clothes.

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Both two girlsof them were his girlfriends.

Editor's note: yuck.

Some powerful men like to show off their lovers in public, and at the same time to show off their power beforein front of their honegroupies.

After one month, I got used to my job and wouldn't meet too many problems when negotiating with captains.

“After a month” would be more natural. We usually say “a/an” instead of “one,” unless there’s a reason to emphasize that it was exactly one.

If we made a deal, the captain would generally charge us at least 5%, or even 10%, as his tips.kickback.

In the US, we call this a kickback, not a tip.

Especially for some freighters from the southeastern countryies, the captains usually asked for: "more, more...! "

I have always been feeling | have always felt shame for them and their countryies.

This means you still feel this shame, even now.

Captains from wWestern countries generally would not charge for their own private tipkickbacks.

Corruption was also rampeant in this port.

In theory, anyone who went into or out of a ship musthad to get a license card approved by the local army (one / a year later, all the dutyresponsibility was transferred to (the) local police).

There were about 20 soldiers stationed in the port,. Director Chen was their officer, and no one in the port dared to offend him.

oOne day in the morning at about 10 o'clock | Around 10 o’clock one morning, my boss received a phone call from Director Chen, and then he asked me to go with him to see the powerful man.

My boss waved his hand to him from a long way away at the gate, h. He and two young girls were having a deluxe breakfast in a corner.

To me, “young girls” means they were about 4 to 10 years old. “Girls” (without the adjective “young”) would be any age between about 4 and 18. “Young women” would be about 15 to 25.

hHe was about 1.75m m. in height, thin with grey hair, some black skin, and wearing leisure clothes.

What does “some black skin” mean? Some of his skin was disfigured or burnt? What color was the rest of his skin?

My boss introduced me to him and asked him for moreto favor to me in the future.

Both two (girls) were his girlfriends.

“Two” is incorrect. “Girls” is unnecessary but not wrong.

Some powerful men like to show off their lovers in public, and at the same time to show off their power before their honeieys.

After one month, I got used to my job and wouldn't meetface too many problems when negotiating with captains.

If we made a deal, the captain would generally charge us at least 5%, or 10% as his tips.

I have always been feeling felt ashamed for them and their country.

Captains from western countries generally would not charge for their own private tips.

In theory, anyone who goes(?) into or out of a ship must get a license card approved by the local army (one year later, all the duty transferred to local police).

one day in thOne morning at about 10 o'clock, my boss received a phone call from Director Chen, then he asked me to go with him to see the powerful man.

My boss waved his hand to him a long way at the gate, he and two young girls were having a deluxegrand breakfast in a corner.

hHe was about 1.75m in height, thin with grey hair, some blacdark skin, and leisure clothes.

My boss introduced me to him and ask him for more favor toto put in a good word for me in the future.

Some powerful men like to show off their lovers in public, and at the same time to show off their power before their honeieys.

After one month, I got used to my job and wouldn't meetface too many problems when negotiating with captains.

If we made a deal, the captain would generally charge us at least 5%, or 10% as his tips.

I have always been feeling felt ashamed for them and their country.

Captains from western countries generally would not charge for their own private tips.

In theory, anyone who goes(?) into or out of a ship must get a license card approved by the local army (one year later, all the duty transferred to local police).

there is a verb missing

My boss waved his hand to him a long way at the gate, he and two young girls were having a deluxelavish breakfast in a corner.

he was about 1.75m in height, thin with grey hair, some blacdark skin, and leisure clothes spots, and he was wearing sports wear/active wear.

My boss introduced me to him and ask him for mput in a good wored favor to me in the futuror me.

to put in a good word for Somebody: Make a supportive remark or favorable recommendation. For example, Please put in a good word for me with the supervisor, or When you see her, put in a good word for the department.