Life in the Ports

A lot of time, my experience in ShenZhen (a vibrant city in southern China which adjacent to Hongkong, I will abbreviate it as SZ), in 1998, is still vivid in my remembrance.ories.

Or a stylistic change:
"A lot of times, my experience of ShenZhen in 1989 is still vivid in my memories."

In this small series, I will be putting my memoryies into words on Langcorrect.

This writing isese writings / writing entries are a challenge for me.

I have outlined some portraits in my mind.

They are of a optimistic young man (me), greedy captains of freighters, voracious and lustful army officers, and stories of human and cigarette smuggling...

A lot of times, my experience in ShenZhen (in 1998 is still a vivid memory. (ShenZhen is a vibrant city in southern China which is adjacent to Hongk Kong,. I will abbreviate it as SZ), in 1998, is still vivid in my remembrance.)

In this small series, I will be puttdescribing my memory into wordies on Langcorrect.

This kind of writing is a challenge for me.

頑張ってね！

I have outlined some portrait in my mind.

また、

I have an outline for it in my mind.

They areIt includes an optimistic young man (me), greedy captains of freighters, voracious and lustful army officers, human and cigarette smuggling ...

へー！怖い！

You're referring back to the outline so we use "it" instead of "they."

A lot of my time, my experience in ShenZhen (a vibrant city in southern China which adjacent to Hongkong, I will abbreviate it as SZ), in 1998, is still vivid in my remembranceory.

I have outlined some portraits in my mind.

They are an optimistic young man (me), greedy captains of freighters, voracious and lustful army officers, human and cigarette smugglingers...

A lot of time, mMy experience in ShenZzhen (a vibrant city in southern China which adjacent to Hongk Kong, I will abbreviate it as SZ), in 1998, is still a vivid in my remembrancememory.

This wWriting this is a challenge for me.

They arwas the optimistic young man (me), and a bunch of greedy captains of freighters, voracious and lustful army officers, and human and cigarette smuggling...

Used "the" for the single person (you), and then used "a bunch" for the groups you list. And when making a list, use "and" when ending that list.