Life at the Ports (end), Last Entry

I became used to all the things at the ports gradually.

Unfortunately, I got ill one day after I haved been there for about 10 months.

This should be past tense.

I ate some pork ribs stewed with radish, and the radish was not washed well and withso it had some pesticide ion it.

残念です！

I had no medical insurance, so I paid thefor all the medicine and treatment fees at the hospital (by) myself.

They were afraid that I was not going to be able to pay the fees and forced me to leave after a week.

ひどいですね。

I read out an order from a ship to my boss in a trembling voice, "cCabbage 50 kilos, carrot 50 kilos, pork rib 300 kilos, apple 500 kilos..." The pesticide affected some nerves, so I felt the sky and the ground revolve around me, and I even. I couldn't even stand up alone.

残念！

My boss said sorry to me and recruited another staff member without paying me anything.

へー！

A month later, I insist leftwas determined to leave SZ and went back to my hometown though she didn't want me to go away fromleave her.

She saw me off at the airport full of tears,. I owe her a lot.

とても悲しそうです。

I have met both unconcerned and loving peopled in SZ,. I will never forget this vibrant city.

Unfortunately, I got ill one day after I haved been there for about 10 months.

My boss sent (took?) me to the nearest hospital quickly.

When you say that your boss “sent” you to the hospital, it explicitly means that he did not take you there himself. If he took you himself, use “took” instead of “sent.”

My boss said “sorry” to me and recruited another [staff member | interpreter | assistant] without paying me anything.

“Staff” is a collective noun meaning a group of people who work for someone. One person on the staff is called a “staff member.”

I gradually got used to all the things at the ports gradually.

"To get use to" is the phrase
Your placement works too, but usually adverbs go before the verb

Unfortunately, I got ill one day after I have beenbeing there for about 10 months.

I think yours work to, just a stylistic change
You were in a state of "being" in SZ when this happened

I ate some pork ribs stewed with radish, but the radish was not washed well and withhad some pesticide in it.

"with" would go with "wash"
It was not washed with pesticide

My boss quickly sent me to the nearest hospital quickly.

I had no medical insurance, so I paid the allall the medicine and treatment fees at the hospital by myself.

They were afraid that I was not able to pay the fees and forced me to leave after a week.

Actually, paying for it was not so hard for me to pay for it.

Using an active voice instead of a passive voice is better because you are focusing on the action (paying)

I read out an order from a ship to my boss in a trembling voice, "cabbage 50 kilos, carrot 50 kilos, pork rib 300 kilos, apple 500 kilos..." The pesticide affected some nerves,. I felt the sky and the ground revolve around me, and I even couldn't even stand up alone.

My boss said sorry to me and recruited another staff without paying me anything.

That sucks :/

A month later, I insist lefted on leaving SZ and went back to my hometown even though she didn't want me to go awayseparate from her.

"insisted on" is the saying, to be determined to do something
"separate from" would be a better way of saying it

She saw me off at the airport full of tears,. I owe her a lot.

I have met both unconcernedexperienced both indifference and loved in SZ,. I will never forget this vibrant city.

Unconcerned and loved are adjectives
To "meet" is to encounter objects, nouns

And to have other people not feel concern for you is called being met/ experiencing 'indifference'